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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 10 months ago
This is indeed a big change. You may be changing a bit too much, while change is good, you can halt your progress completely by making to many revisions (*says as if I wasn’t the most guilty of this exact thing). However, first person can help more with experiential writing, which I think is more your style anyways. I t…
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Loopy replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 2 years, 10 months ago
Yes! I got them right!
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
@everyone
Ooo I have a character from Lois and Felicity’s world who’d be perfect as a school nurse! Do we already have one of those?
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 10 months ago
I’ve never read a first person novel with multiple POVs, but that’s not to say they don’t exist.
Oh, that’s funny! I’ve read WAY more first person novels with multiple POV’s. i’ve read more of those than third person POV’s.
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Loopy replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 2 years, 10 months ago
Ack there’s so many talented artists on this forum…I need to show myself out of the room 😅
No! I don’t ever want my art to discourage others from drawing! Trust me, it’s not talent. I’ve been practicing drawing for years. I want my art to inspire other people to want to draw too, no matter their skill level. If you ever do som…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 10 months ago
@jonas @thearcaneaxiom @highscribeofaetherium
So with my revision of my WIP, I’m changing things a little. I’m thinking of writing it in first person now. I started writing yesterday, but now I’m stuck! How should I continue?
Also, is there anything I could improve on?
(Am I changing things too much?)
Chapter 1
The world is a dark…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
Just fight him or something. The Sword chirped, That always seems to help.
Lol
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
Ottoline
She opened her eyes and sat up. Rays of light seeped in through the windows. She turned over in her bed. They were all exhausted.
“Do we have to go downstairs to eat breakfast? I mean have to?” Hedieh was saying from the bunk directly above Ottoline’s. “Because I don’t want to get murdered by a guy with anger issues.”
“I don’t want to…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NaNoWriMo! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
Great job! Yesterday I wrote 1,167.
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
lol
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Ruth replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
And then the nest one…

“Oh boy, we’re all gonna die.”
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Ruth replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
Wouldn’t it be funny if the first dragon they go to fight was like this?

🤣🤣🤣 “This isn’t going to be so hard after all”
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Ruth replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
*eagerly gets cozy, waiting for the fun to begin*
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Loopy replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 2 years, 10 months ago
@rae lol those are great
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Loopy replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 2 years, 10 months ago
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
Soo Marcaedes (name pending) is basically the ghost of Marcel from the past… except not 😂 He’s the all-powerful being who gives Marcel abilities, but although they are super different, they’re still the same person. Like a split personality, but for magical reasons.
I don’t really understand that, but it sounds really cool. XD
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
Ellie
“SHOPPING?!? I LOVE SHOPPING!!!” One of the girls shrieked. Ellie flinched and covered her ears, mirroring another one of the dwarves. “What are we waiting for?? Let’s go!” And they were gone.
The three girls looked at each other and shrugged, then continued to weave their way through the crowd.
Ellie didn’t like crowds. They…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 2 years, 10 months ago
If someone ever looks at my browser history…
“WHY were you looking at shoulder fractures and gunshot wounds?!?!” -
Ruth replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 2 years, 10 months ago
Describe in one word what writing is…
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Ruth replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 2 years, 10 months ago
Interviewer asking me questions: Why did you go into writing?
Me: Not because it’s easy, I can tell you that!
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