TheShadow

@savannah_grace2009

Oh man, this is gonna get rough. Not much to say yet. Sorry!!! I’m more of a plot critic then format critic. I’m still waiting to see how this all plays out.

Thanks for reading this because it keeps me from slacking off when people are expecting new chapters XD

SAME!!! And btw, did I tag you on Let There Be Light’s…[Read more]

@rae

And you can rip apart my writing too XD XD

@rae

I blame all of you for the lack of sleep last night XD. Seriously, what Loopy said had me thinking.

Sorry!

… but I’m also glad I got you thinking 😉

Soo if Chase’s sacrifice for Jenny felt more light and joyful, maybe you could show how he’s grown from the way he acted with Marcel? I’m not sure how exactly, but you could probably keep all…[Read more]

@rae

In my opinion, just don’t think of him as a “hero” when he sacrifices himself. You can still keep him the same, just don’t think of him the same way.

Idk if this is making sense…

I tried lol

@theshadow

You’re good!!!! Haha thanks for wanting to read it!!!

@everyone

Thanks for reading this because it keeps me from slacking off when people are expecting new chapters XD

@theshadow

Thanks!! I’ll add that to my notes. Although, Turin isn’t really one for questions. Or talking. At all.

@theshadow

No problem!! Thank you for all the help you have given!

@savannah_grace2009 @loopylin @whalekeeper

exactly. If I am portraying it wrong, I need to change it. I just don’t want to change it yet because something has changed inside of Chase, and I need to figure out what it is first. That was what I was trying to say.

@keilah-h

Are you ready to post a description?

I’m sorry, I’m just excited to draw one of your charries 🙂

@grcr

Ok then. You asked for it!!

Jonathan’s eyes widened in terror and his face went white. He had expected imprisonment and perhaps more interrogations. His mind had already been working through all the escape tactics he knew of. Now, he stopped short. Death? The thought had never crossed his mind. It was in that moment that Jonathan…

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Chapter 13

Decay

“Sssef! I’m not paying you to ssstand there doing nothing,” the Pythonos’s voice carried, snapping her back to attention.

“Yes sir,” she lowered her head, her cheeks flushing with embarrassment as her fellow workers all looked up from their work.

Shaking her head to clear her thoughts, she turned back to the pile of trash. I…[Read more]

@rae

I don’t think anyone was saying that you need to change Chase. Like Loopy and Whaley said, it’s not bad that he has that flaw, because he’s a flawed character that grows and changes in your story. We were just concerned that you were portraying him as more of a hero and that flaw was celebrated.

@whalekeeper @loopylin correct me if I’m wrong…XD

@theducktator

Sorry this took a minute! Here she is.

@elishavet-pidyon

Was competently blindsided. *picks slef up out of dirt and dusts off* “I feel like Calvin”

And as you love Peter Pevensie (from the BOOKS), and Smalden, draw beautifully, and like skirts, I feel an unavoidable obligation to join the welcoming team. So I shall have to make the most of it.

Aw, thank you! I’m so glad you like my…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Interesting plot turn! Looks like Sef and her mom are gonna have a forbidden child…… Interesting. I don’t have much to say yet. I would like to see how some of this starts panning out. I’m definitely intrigued enough to keep reading!

@keilah-h

Um no. Oh wait, I can’t say that ’cause it’s Monday. 🙁 lol.

Well, It’s Monday! I’m ready!!! Shoot!

@princesachronicle22 @hybridlore @grcr @koshka

Ok. Wow, I’m off for one day and the whole world tags me. You should see my inbox!!! lol. Ok, because I don’t want to go back and weed through who said what, I’m just tagging y’all who tagged me and replying to the world in general.

So, for the cover, it looks like I’ll be doing style seven.…[Read more]

@loopylin @whalekeeper @savannah_grace2009

I blame all of you for the lack of sleep last night XD. Seriously, what Loopy said had me thinking.

I understand your concerns, but as of now, I’m not going to change anything with Chase and just keep him going on the path I have laid so far. The reason is there’s something different in Chase. I haven’t…[Read more]

@kyronthearcanin

Sure! Come join us!

@whalekeeper

Hahaha 🤣🤣🤣