TheShadow

@linus-smallprint

Alan has had his memory whipped by before

I noticed that, but once you did it two times in a row I thought I’d mention it.

No problem on time. I was just being annoying as ordered. If I get too annoying tell me to stop. lol.

I am excited to hear what happens though!

@linus-smallprint @keilah-h @theshadow

And here is part two of what I posted today.

Aaron had just finished leading a time of prayer in the Great Hall, when there was a disturbance at the door. Several people in the room shifted, and Aaron looked about, trying to find the source of the disruption.

All at once, people scrambled back from the…

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@linus-smallprint @keilah-h @theshadow

Ok, I started braking this one into a few more sections because it flowed better. Here are two, and I’m going to work on the rest.

Days passed, and every night the enemy tried to terrorize those who stood on the walls, chanting war songs, battle cries, or threats, launching stones or flaming projectiles…

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@linus-smallprint

Oh man. What did I say. Come on Alan, get some sense in your silly head!

My only complaint in this one would be A.) You used “whipped” instead of “wiped” (a mistake I myself often make which is why I caught it, lol) and then the Do not, would not, will not, etc. Like I’ve said before, it doesn’t fit with the style of the…[Read more]

@calyhuge

Not to be to pushy, but are you ready to rp, or are you not inspired?

@keilah-h

also that’s an awesome name for the Skwadron. Any in universe reason why the word is spelled with  “SK” instead of “QU” or was it just for fun?

There is no q in the Realn alphabet. Therefore, there is no ‘q is always followed by u’ rule. To recreate this specific sound, they use the runes for k and w together. From Realn to English, W…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

I also like to see the variety of personalities in different characters as they become Christians.

YES! Flat characters are no fun.

Prediction: Something dangerous is just around the corner.

What would ever make you say that……………?

@linus-smallprint

Phew! That’s a lot about horses. I think I will grab everything you said about them and save it in a document for future reference. In case you could not tell, Martha likes horses and would definitely know all of this, so in order to have her talk about it, I will need to know it. Thank you for typing this all out!

You’re w…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

Ok, i finished reading everything you have written and here are my notes.

Chapter 6

Roof, the poor kid has someone aiming a crossbow at him all day? That won’t make him nervous by any means. Oh no, he’ll be cool as cucumbers. 🙄

I KNEW the crow was the spy. I am sure of it now! Creepy.

Oh man, Phil is the oldest of my bro…[Read more]

@keilah-h

boomerangs?

Mandin and Nahim’s Space Skwad Skwadron.

also how come you use 21:00? You’re not in the US? (You don’t have to say specifically where you’re from.)

Actually, I’ve never left the US before. I just started using 24-hour time because it’s more practical. Still trying to make it like second-nature though.

@theducktator

Mandin isn’t most the time, except playful punches that feel more like a tap than a punch. The thing is, the Boomerangs were messing around in my head, having some fun and Nahim got hurt. Mandin is considered very strong even for a Realn, so he tries to be careful and not hurt people, but he used a little too much strength and…[Read more]

wow. It actually went though! Good grief!

@keilah-h @Anyone_who_joins_this_late_and_doesn’t_want_to_sift

Ok, let’s see if this will send…………

The Flames of Hope Trilogy
Book 1
Let There Be Light
 
And God said,
“Let there be light,”
and there was light…
                             ~Genesis 1:3
 

Long ago there was a small kingdom called Ardenta. It was a beautiful land,…

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@keilah-h

Oh, I hadn’t even thought of that. Yes, let me see…….. what if I post everything that I have shared on here in one long message? I work with LibreOffice which is outdated and for old computers like the one I use. I think this would be easiest.

@keilah-h

Sure thing! I’ll put the link here, and you can skim through the chapters to catch up a little.

WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy

@keilah-h

why would you get a lot of flak?

Well, let’s just say my beliefs are not popular around my peers. You’d be surprised how mean both guys and girls can be when they disagree on stuff like this. I’ve gotten to the place where I know I’ve just gotta speak the truth in love and brace for the return fire…. which often times is more full of…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint @theshadow @whalekeeper  @savannah_grace2009(I’ll tag you in case you still want to keep reading this)

Ok, here is the next part. It’s pretty short, but i have some edits to run on the part after, which is very long.

It took some time for the crowd to disperse. Only one child had believed, but Aaron was far from discouraged.…

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@linus-smallprint

Ok, I’ll go for it. Thank you for the encouragement. Give me a second to get another scene.