TheShadow

@rae

It’s tipping down so the tail will hit the ground first. He was trying to go up to escape the shelling but he wasn’t fast enough. it’ll start flipping as it goes down, but for now the engine killed and it’s falling.

does that make sense?

You’ll find out chapter 20 or so.

@hybridlore

Yay, Mandin is back 😂

Did you really miss him that much!? he was only gone for…three and a half chapters!

He’ll be sticking around a while until something happens…oh man I just realized how much you’re gonna hate me XD

@ellette-giselle

I think I’m ruining it, and it’s really nice but why is the plane flying up? It should be going down. Am I missing something?

@mineralizedwritings

Wow! The time hassle really paid for itself! That’s just epic!

@linus-smallprint

(In other words, is he trying to be disciplined in fighting his worry, but forgetting to be dependant on God to help him (which seems quite likely since he is struggling with doubt itself))

100% Yes.

I know I’m not much of a romance guy, but even I wanted to see this in developed scenes instead of a summary. I want to see t…

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@linus-smallprint

Nah, just call him Alan. That’s his name after all. I mean, people don’t refer to you as “The Canadian” or “The guy with the wired way of measuring fences” or, “The guy with a part time job” lol.

They call you Justin, or Linus. those are your names/nicknames/online-names. but they are still your names.

Just call him Alan.

I…

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A horse stable? MA be a war reenactment at a museum? A fair?

@keilah-h @linus-smallprint

OK, I’m back. new section, and would really love feedback on this because It’s still in a stage where I would be wil;ling to change or tweak things.

It was a long week of prayer before Aaron spoke to Sabina about the idea of marriage. Sabina was very surprised, but Aaron had never seen her so joyfully since her…

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Here’s one I did for one of my books. This is Even, my pilot. He’s not having a great day at the moment. But I sure love the angle!!!

@linus-smallprint

PS.

Any thoughts on my music styles? lol.

@keilah-h

Don’t worry, I’m not inclined to get gory. It’s basically just gonna be threats.

@whalekeeper

Okay, makes sense.

@linus-smallprint

I liked this!! I don’t know if I mentioned this yet, but when you refer to Alan as “the soldier” it kinda throws me, especially since 1) he has a name that we know, and 2) this is something you kinda just started.
other then that, no complaints.
(I notice you use a lot of British spellings. I’m guessing that’s Canadian?…[Read more]

@mineralizedwritings

ack!! My old nemeses— facial hair! I can never do it right! It always ends up looking like charcoal smears.

I’ll try, but I’m gonna murder this fella’s face!

yeah, we’ve been doing two weeks.

@theshadow

well, I don’t think this is going to be a one-size-fits-all-easy-answer. However, I’m willing to share what I do.

so, I get said idea wether it be plot, character, or scene. From there I write it down in a special journal specifically for this purpose. Then, I pray about it. I ask God to guide me and speak through my writing. I ask…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

So…

Alpha’s part was okay. Not perfect, but okay.

I’m not sure how they’d block his powers, since the only way to do that effectively is make him very tired, but Alpha has an extreme immunity to basically anything so…it’d take more than half of a vile to do that unless it was some super potion, but whatever. It doesn’t matter…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009
@whalekeeper
@keilah-h

im glad we’re all on the same page now.
I agree that you can’t pin marriage to an age. Marriage comes in God’s timing. However, I believe Aaron and Sabina are ready. Yes, they share affection, and they also have been seeing each other day in and day out for a year or more! Knowing someone so well like…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

I never meant to say that I didn’t approve of young marriage! I meant that I think it shouldn’t be taken lightly. I agree with Whaley that it is not a sin, it just needs to be well thought out.

Young age does NOT cause divorce. I meant to say that if you are married young on impulse and you didn’t think it through, then it’s…[Read more]

@hybridlore

Chapters 9 and 10 should now be on the docs.

Just note I really do not like chapter 9, and I’m just bearing with it right now cuz I’m not sure exactly how I want to change it.