TheShadow

@linus-smallprint

Thanks so much for the feedback! I’m feeling pretty confidant with this new switch, so you can delete the old version. lol.

What’s with suddenly swapping the governor in this new version?

well, a few reasons.

1. Flows better with the idea that they just opened the gates after 7 years.

2. Why else would Asher and Eric have s…[Read more]

@elishavet-pidyon

The humor in that chapter is so good. lol.

@elishavet-pidyon

Good, good. I’m glad this is better.

Yesterday we reached Acts 12 in a sermon series at our church, and I almost started laughing because it was pretty perfect. So yeah, that’s where I got my inspiration.

@raxforge

The ship.

The way you interact with one another would be very awkward if you weren’t.

Just saying.

@hybridlore

Asher would not appreciate you bringing that up again. lol.

No, not much to rewrite. Just a little.

@hybridlore

Okay, I see what you mean. Eric was just teasing when he was being formal.

I’m envisioning a much larger cut. As I said, a “gash”And actually, depending on where the cut is, you can bleed out.Maybe not from something like that, though. That might be overdoing it. This is my first draft of this section. 😉

@hybridlore

So, now that I’m going with this version, do you have any overall thoughts about the section?

@hybridlore

Okay, that’s reasonable.

You win.

@hybridlore

No, you can’t just say that. Give me a literary reason why I should do this rather then the other one. Why is this better?

@hybridlore   @linus-smallprint    @koshka   @keilah-h    @elishavet-pidyon   @grcr

ALTERNATE NEXT SECTION!!!!!

Please be honest as y’all read this, because saving the boys is going to be a HUGE change. However, I think it may be the right one, and some interesting things happened that makes me think so. However, I am still on the edge, a…[Read more]

@theducktator

How did you not know that?

lol.

It was pretty obvious. lol.

@whalekeeper

 

Do you wait to figure out the psychology of the character during the writing, or do you graph that too?

Not exactly sure what you mean by that……..

(Sorry, I don’t really do technical names. I just do whatever I’m going to do. lol. If that makes sense.)

@raxforge @theducktator

Yay! An excuse to talk about Andrew!!!!!!!

1. He’s really really really adorable, and I will not hear otherwise!
2. He has the best smile EVER, EVER
3. He likes nicknames apparently (really adorable)
4. He’s the most gentlemanly guy you’ll ever meet
5. He thinks his jokes are stupid when they’re actually hilarious (I just…

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@whalekeeper XD I should have known.

He’s the only writing channel I’m subscribed to. He’s simultaneously hilarious and extremely helpful. I love it.

The 9 types videos he’s making are especially helpful.

Yessss. Those are the best. They’re really the only way I’ve been learning about the enneagram. When I first watched the type 7 video and i…[Read more]

@whalekeeper (three tags in a row I’m sorry I keep forgetting to add things)

Also, I would love to see your cope chart :] I struggle with organizing my written down stuff.

@whalekeeper Here’s the video where he explains how to use it.

I don’t agree with everything he talks about, but he understands story structure really well and is able to explain things really clearly and simply (to me at least)

Also he’s not Christian, I don’t remember if he cusses or not, in…[Read more]

@whalekeeper You might like this character sheet. It’s from a scriptwriting  YouTube channel that I really like.
I’ve been having a hard time with Ellie’s character so I’m trying it out

@loopylin

I don’t write animal characters. I can’t get into it like people. lol.

Thanks for the invite!

@whalekeeper

Hey, sorry it took a minute.

How detailed does that usually get?

Oh it depends. Sometimes I only have 4 or so points, and sometimes it’s close to 16. It just all depends on what points I know I need/want to hit.

What do you mean by graphing characters?

I have a sheet with the character’s name at the top. Then I add age,…[Read more]