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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 9 months ago
I don’t know how a four year old thinks hahaha
honestly I had really deep thoughts for a little kid and I have always thought really complex, so it seems realistic to me XDXD
I will work on it!!!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 year, 9 months ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 year, 9 months ago
But I loved the tragedy! It was so sweet and so sad! It made is seem almost more meaningful.
Your Werner post is awesome! He’s such a handsome doctor!
Dashingly handsome. 🫠
lololol
He is a quiet fella, and he loves reading. (including banned books……👀)
Ho, ho. He’s in love, too.
Lol.
He sure is.
Are all those little gir…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
Drama Queen
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 9 months ago
@anyone-who-is-interested
Chapter 1
Strong hands grabbed at her shoulders, trying to rip her away.
But Sef wouldn’t let go.
Eyes scrunched shut, tears leaking from the corners, she clung to her father like he was the only thing keeping her life together.
In a way, he was.
And now he was leaving.
“Let go, Sef,” her mother said stern…
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Loopy replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
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Loopy replied to the topic The diamond game. in the forum Film 1 year, 9 months ago
(Oh my gosh, I was about to use the middle finger emoji to point up 😭 I am so stupid lol! I never EVER use that emoji and I wasn’t looking so I clicked it and then quickly deleted it 😭😭😭😭)
XD I would have laughed so hard if you did. Don’t worry, I wouldn’t believe that you would intentionally do that. I’ve almost acciden…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
He took her “try to keep up” as a little insulting. There was no way that this girl was faster than he when he charmed the wind.
Lol Fel’s just being cocky. It would take a lot for her to acknowledge that she is not on the same level as all the super powered characters.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 9 months ago
Looks like this section is a hit!
I mostly use ESV, but sometimes I’ll use another version if I find it translates the Hebrew/Greek better for the particular verse/passage.
I’m glad you like that scene. It’s one of my fav.
Spring Fever is a real thing. Especially among the teenage guys at our church.
lol.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 9 months ago
I don’t know. I see that stuff really fast, but it might just be me. Do you want it to come as a shock?
By the way, do you have any guesses for why Alan was able to defeat his attackers so easily while Stripe was easily beaten?
Two.
One, capturing Alan’s father is a decoy because for some reason the king wants Alan to…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
@raxforge @theshadow @freed_and_redeemed @the_lost-journal
Ah! You all hit me with a snowball!
So I wrote a short story
The True Magic of Christmas
December 25th, 1914.
I dread the date. Usually I would be at home, home with little Henry and Mum, but not this year. I will miss them more than usual tomorrow. Oh, if only this war had never…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
@rae @raxforge @loopylin @hybridlore @jonas @grcr @whalekeeper
Leon and Julian — Elderstrand (w/Group 1)
Leon’s expression clouded with worry as Marcel gestured to his ears. He can’t hear!
Marcel’s next words confirmed the suspicion. “Can’t hear. Are they close?”
Leon shook his head and gave Marcel the Imperial Military “a…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
@rae @raxforge @loopylin @grcr @hybridlore @jonas @whalekeeper
Leon and Julian— Elderstrand (wsome of Group 1)
Leon watched as the girl raced off, followed by Ben, Flare, and Brutus. Or, was it Baron. Leon’s brows drew together. Something wasn’t right about him. whatever the case, Leon was secretly glad he was gone. though part…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 9 months ago
@hybridlore @linus-smallprint @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @grcr
NEXT SECTION
Stephen and David continued to grow, and Joseph found himself looking up to them in many ways. Mr. Caddick was always a source of wisdom, and Joseph found himself coming to him often. It seemed so strange to Joseph that they all looked up to him,…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 9 months ago
btw, thanks for the “guy-talk” scene. 😉
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 year, 9 months ago
Oh my goodness.
You’ve ruined me, girl!
oh I couldn’t breathe! I’m crying right now. Oh man, that was such a good, good story! I love the tragedy of it!
Tell your brother he did an amazing job!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
Oh, whoops. I forgot I got hit by a snowball.
Just a sec.
Liam didn’t seem to agree, but he let the matter go.
They were silent a moment. Then, Liam started coughing. It was a small cough at first, but it grew harsher and stronger. “Easy, easy,” Werner said, carefully helping Liam to sit up. He whipped out his handk…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The diamond game. in the forum Film 1 year, 9 months ago
Thanks so much for coming up with this! It looks like a fun idea.
I may not be able to participate, we’ll have to see. I have a lot going on right now. 😉
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 9 months ago
To say I didn’t know the minute Alan’s father made the plan would be lying.
I knew he was going to get caught.
I really liked this chapter! I like it a whole lot!
Poor Stripe, I feel bad for him. Perfume is awful!! Especially ON YOUR NOSE!
Okay, the similarities thing
The only thing that stood out to me as being…[Read more]
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