TheShadow

@keilah-h

Great! Perfect!

I’ll see what I can do.

I often draw in the evenings while hanging out with my big brother, and all I can think about rn is what he’s gonna say when he sees what I’m drawing, and now I’m gonna explain myself lol

@keilah-h

and a weird amount of bread

Why do I have a suspicious feeling that Soldier is involved?

Let me guess, he’s teleporting bread to create bread monsters?

Lol, that was one of the best moments ever.

I’m dead rn for what I want to draw so I’ll give it a shot drawing the scene. No promises that you’ll like it, I’m bad at wings, and at…[Read more]

@koshka
Yes, that is me. 100%

@raxforge @jonas @loopylin

Baron (Brutus)—Ben Gunn, Flare, Ellis, trying to find Fel and Brea (I think I got that right)

Brutus hesitated in following the others. The soldiers were terrified of these creatures. He held his scarf up over his nose and mouth. His eyes followed the disappearing forms of his companions. He could use his wind to…[Read more]

Could you give me some more description on these teens?

I…worldbuild in the dark at night usually (I have trouble sleeping) and I rarely, if ever, actually write a comprehensive thing on my world, I just scribble things on random sheets of paper or in notebooks that I then loose in the sea of notebooks that I have already.

Yeah, I need to change some of my writing habits.

@raxforge

Oh, that is unfortunate. But next time you go skiing, tell them that my nine year old sister can do a double black, so that definitely means you can do a black

@raxforge

Oh, that stinks 🙁

Are you able to do a black? Or a double black?

Also yeah, they are

@raxforge

Nice! What levels did you do? Green, blue black or double black!?

(IDK what else to do, my sis is on the google meet so I am bored)

@whalekeeper @theshadow

Tenz

As Emeline spoke, Tenz shrunk back against the wall. The vapor around him had all but disappeared besides the tendrils that carried Reid. “I want Omi,” His quiet, childish voice, barely to be heard, was tinged with loneliness and sorrow.

@rae

thx

@the_lost-journal

lol

@rae

I really need to stop

@highscribeofaetherium

Thank you for the critique! You gave me some very helpful feedback.

Just a couple things to address so you don’t have to keep wondering

The second and third sentences seem to imply that Max’s only non-human feature is that his eyes are full of emotion. That doesn’t seem like a necessarily inhuman trait. Do I understand cor…

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@rae

ok I have one more…

v@savannah_grace2009

oh, lol! I don’t know how that is!!!

@ellette-giselle

RAE THIS IS INCREDIBLE!!! I LOVE THIS SO MUCH!!!! YOU ARE AN INSANELY AMAZING AUTHORESS! Oh wow! This is so good! The characters, the world, the personalities, the dialogue, the description!!!!!  I COULD GO ON FOREVER!!!!!!!!!

Wow, thanks.

I wasn’t expecting that enthuastic of a response.

Hopefully notifications work for you…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle @keilah-h @highscribeofaetherium

Third story! This should fill in a few gaps from the second

 
A Visitor in the Night
“’Suuuuuuch is…the faaaaaaate of the eh-vil–”

“Not /eh/. Look, there’s a vowel after the /v/, so it’s…C’mon, you’re almost done,” A mother coaxed her young son.

“/Ee/! Ee-vil-do-er.’ Evil-doer, right?” Simeon…[Read more]

@the_lost-journal

It is supposed to say they usually hang out at their own house, and are not seen out in the open lol!

WHAT IS THISSSS
IT’S EVEN MORE ACURRATE
AHHH I LOVE IT SO MUCH

THANK YOU SO MUCHHHH