TheShadow

@whalekeeper

Cassius

“My age? I… I haven’t thought about my age. I’ve missed so many birthdays because of my diseases… So I’ve lost track. Let’s see… If I was born on the 1209th Jahre… in the month of Epteser the 12th…. And this Jahre is 1228… And it’s already Aymay… Then… I’m 19 years old… No… that can’t be right… I’m too…[Read more]

@hybridlore

Maybe…….

In my world we don’t get to plan that far ahead. So I guess set the date and we’ll see if I can make it.

@hybridlore I’m available the 24th and 31st, but I’m not sure about the 7th yet. I can do Saturday mornings, but afternoons are better for me since I’m 3 hours behind everyone. That would also give @mineralizedwritings the chance to join too if she wants to and is feeling up to it.

@rae @whalekeeper

 Cassius

Cassius watched as Gabriel lay down like an animal. “You look like Leander.” Cassius said plainly. “You should sleep straight with your back on the ground. Your pillow should lift up your head, that will hurt your neck. And you should have a small blanket or pillow underneath the curve of your back.” Cassius pointed…[Read more]

Have you ever given a charrie of yours a weird mannerism that you have yourself?

A few of my charries like to sleep in a fetal position, or curled up around a pushie or blanket. And Gabriel stretches similar to a cat. Mannerisms I sometimes have.

@the_lost-journal @whalekeeper

The Protector—Gabriel

The scent of the smoke invaded Gabriel’s nostrils. It sickened him, but he remained silent, listening to Cassius’s talk about pleasure. Internally, he wondered if happiness and pleasure were different, and if they were, how were they different. A small plop sound woke him from his thoughts. H…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Cassius and Leander

Cassius woke up. He looked up at the two sitting there. He walked behind them silently. “I do not wish to disturb your bonding, but I smell smoke. Perhaps an imbecile lit part of the maze on fire.” Cassius said with little worry or anxiety in his tone. “I suggest we lea-” Cassius stopped and looked down at the…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

How did the doctor visit go?

The Protector—Gabriel

Gabriel hesitated, before sitting on the stone, bringing his knees up to his chest. He tensed at the slightest noises, eyes darting to where Cassius and Leander slept. “Uh… so do you want me talk like the Protector, or like…my other persona? Or just not talk at all.”

@linus-smallprint

ah, that makes a little more sense.

okay then. Looks like we both win. I forgot their Babylonian names were used when they were set over provinces.

@linus-smallprint

still very confused…. Washing soap?

Really? It seemed Daniel’s friends are referred to by their Babylonian names, but maybe that is just in the book of Daniel. Huh. I guess the most famous stuff is what ends up sticking around more.

I can check my notes again, but when I did an indeph study into Daniel I’m almost positive the o…[Read more]

@jonas I’d love to join! I do have a summer job (lunch break rn), so I’m not sure how much time and energy I’ll actually have, but I would really love to have other people pushing me to get writing done.

I’ll have a hard time picking which story to work on though.

@theducktator

Lolololol. *high five*

@linus-smallprint

Thank you!

I spent at least an hour cleaning soap

what?!

Okay. Where are all those ladies and older people hiding?

In the olden days girls didn’t really do things on their own. In Roman culture it was actually inappropriate for a young woman to be on the streets alone. Plus, they were considered as property of their father…[Read more]

@hybridlore

Absolutely.

I’ll see if I have time. I have rowing to do, plus I’m looking into getting a job this summer as well as taking the first steps to getting my driver’s permit since I’m turning 16 end of July and would like to get my permit as soon as possible. If I have time, I’d be interested!

Not sure what I’d write yet though…

@jonas

This sounds like a cool idea. I don’t write very orthodox, so I won’t have an outline. (just character outlines). I’m also not sure if I’m sharing my current novels on line for marketing purposes. (They’ll be releasing this summer, starting with the first one later this month)

But I’d sure be willing to breathe down anyone’s neck who…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed      @hybridlore     @koshka     @keilah-h       @elishavet-pidyon       @linus-smallprint

NEXT SECTION!!!

Two days later, Leon was walking home from visiting the Krügers in the late evening. He was nearly home when someone called out, “You there, what’s your business?”

Leon turned around and saw a young soldier lean…

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@whalekeeper

Barnes is self’s >:[      (XD)

Ooops! What I meant to say was “Barnes is selfish >:[”

No “self’s!” +O+ she is SO self’s!!!!!

@esther-c

Hiiii Esther! I just saw this!!!
I have a critique for Easton’s character arc.

You’ve been having him do all these things for Tyler, and having him trying to encourage Tyler.

Do you mean to have him come off as kind of distant and cold? like Shadow said, he feels really impersonal.

What I mean is, in your book are you trying to show…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed      @hybridlore     @koshka     @keilah-h       @elishavet-pidyon       @linus-smallprint

I was gonna give people a chance to catch up while I busy myself shooting and poor characters and dumping them out of airplanes……. but I think I’ll post the next section now.