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TheShadow replied to the topic Couple RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 1 week ago
I don’t think we’ve met before so hello!! I’m Shadow, nice to meet you! Your charries sound great, the wolf idea is really cool!
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TheShadow replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 4 months, 1 week ago
Ok, the last section on the first page was good, but when Aaron is telling Turin about how sin entered the world and when Christ lived for us, I think someone learning about it would ask one or two more questions to understand it better. Other than that, it was good. I have to go help my brother now with something, so I will read…[Read more]
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TheShadow replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 4 months, 1 week ago
Sorry, I have been slacking with giving feedback lately. Summer is really getting ahead of me lol. I will try to give you feedback today after I read over the sections you posted.
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TheShadow replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 months, 1 week ago
Thanks so much for tagging me!! Sorry I haven’t been keeping up, summer has been a little crazy XD. Thank you for the link to the chapters too, that’s so nice! I’ll try to catch up as soon as possible.
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Sara and TheShadow are now friends 4 months, 1 week ago
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TheShadow replied to the topic Couple RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 1 week ago
I think that would make more sense, so probably.
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TheShadow replied to the topic How dark is too dark? in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 1 week ago
I don’t have much to add since @thearcaneaxiom points were really good (nice job!)
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TheShadow replied to the topic Couple RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 2 weeks ago
Eldred and Rosalind are at the cabins too.
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TheShadow replied to the topic Couple RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 2 weeks ago
Trevor
The creature raised its claw, but before it could slash Trevor he jumped to the side. Then, before he could realize what was happening, Fairy had defeated it, and it lay on the ground, motionless.
Trevor stared as Silvanis kissed Fairy on the forehead, then realized everyone was watching. “Uh, you guys didn’t see tha…[Read more]
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TheShadow replied to the topic Art Challenge! in the forum Art 4 months, 2 weeks ago
Thank you!!
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TheShadow replied to the topic Couple RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 2 weeks ago
Silvanis does have a plan in all this. Don’t worry, he’d never let serious harm come to Fairy.
I was starting to wonder at the end there lol
Trevor
“Great plan, Trevor, just omit the Silvanis and Sniper part. Fairy will handle it alone. If anyone disagrees, they answer to me.” As Silvanis said this, his skin began to glow.…[Read more]
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TheShadow replied to the topic Art Challenge! in the forum Art 4 months, 2 weeks ago
@ellette-giselle @keilah-h @highscribeofaetherium @linus-smallprint @grcr @mineralizedwritings
Good job, everyone’s looked great! Congrats GRCR!!
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TheShadow replied to the topic Do You Use Fantasy Maps? in the forum Fantasy 4 months, 2 weeks ago
I look at it a few times in the beginning, and then maybe when I’m confused at the placement of a new place, but not often.
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TheShadow replied to the topic Art Challenge! in the forum Art 4 months, 2 weeks ago
Thanks, and I think I get what you mean. Your Tenz drawing is really good btw!!
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TheShadow replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 months, 2 weeks ago
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TheShadow replied to the topic Couple RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 2 weeks ago
Trevor
“Now!” Sniper yelled as the creature tensed. Sniper shot it with his rifle, then quickly parried a blow from the creature with his knife. “Nice move!” Trevor exclaimed as he dodged the creature lurch towards him and Azalea. He analyzed it for a moment, then saw it’s weak point.
“Sniper, what if Azalea and I try distracting…[Read more]
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TheShadow replied to the topic Art Challenge! in the forum Art 4 months, 2 weeks ago
Sorry this is late and I understand if I still can’t enter it, but here’s my Tenz drawing (sorry I made him winking, eyes are not my strong suit):
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TheShadow replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 months, 2 weeks ago
So I… kind of forgot you tagged me. I’m sorry, that’s my bad. I would be willing to follow your story still if you wouldn’t mind.
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TheShadow replied to the topic Art Challenge! in the forum Art 4 months, 2 weeks ago
Thanks for the heads up. My drawing is like 90% done, I just have a few things to finish so I probably won’t be able to submit it before the time. Is there any way that the judging time could be pushed back a bit? If not, it’s fine and I totally understand.
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TheShadow replied to the topic Character Sketches in the forum Art 4 months, 2 weeks ago
It looks so good!!!! I LOVE IT, THANK YOU!!!!
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