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@whalekeeper

I don’t have much to add since @thearcaneaxiom points were really good (nice job!)

@theducktator

Eldred and Rosalind are at the cabins too.

@keilah-h @rae

Trevor

The creature raised its claw, but before it could slash Trevor he jumped to the side. Then, before he could realize what was happening, Fairy had defeated it, and it lay on the ground, motionless.

Trevor stared as Silvanis kissed Fairy on the forehead, then realized everyone was watching. “Uh, you guys didn’t see tha…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Thank you!!

@keilah-h @rae

Silvanis does have a plan in all this. Don’t worry, he’d never let serious harm come to Fairy.

I was starting to wonder at the end there lol

Trevor

“Great plan, Trevor, just omit the Silvanis and Sniper part. Fairy will handle it alone. If anyone disagrees, they answer to me.” As Silvanis said this, his skin began to glow.…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle @keilah-h @highscribeofaetherium @linus-smallprint @grcr @mineralizedwritings

Good job, everyone’s looked great! Congrats GRCR!!

@theducktator

I look at it a few times in the beginning, and then maybe when I’m confused at the placement of a new place, but not often.

@rae

Thanks, and I think I get what you mean. Your Tenz drawing is really good btw!!

@linus-smallprint

Your welcome, and thanks for letting me read it!!

@keilah-h @rae

Trevor

“Now!” Sniper yelled as the creature tensed. Sniper shot it with his rifle, then quickly parried a blow from the creature with his knife. “Nice move!” Trevor exclaimed as he dodged the creature lurch towards him and Azalea. He analyzed it for a moment, then saw it’s weak point.

“Sniper, what if Azalea and I try distracting…[Read more]

@rae

Sorry this is late and I understand if I still can’t enter it, but here’s my Tenz drawing (sorry I made him winking, eyes are not my strong suit):

@linus-smallprint

So I… kind of forgot you tagged me. I’m sorry, that’s my bad. I would be willing to follow your story still if you wouldn’t mind.

@rae

Thanks for the heads up. My drawing is like 90% done, I just have a few things to finish so I probably won’t be able to submit it before the time. Is there any way that the judging time could be pushed back a bit? If not, it’s fine and I totally understand.

@ellette-giselle

It looks so good!!!! I LOVE IT, THANK YOU!!!!

@ellette-giselle

I like Aaron so far, I think his temper adds more depth to him. The other characters are fine, I haven’t gotten to know them as much yet.

@ellette-giselle

Just to match, can you do b&w? Thanks.

@ellette-giselle

Just finished reading this section, and I do have two things to say about it. First, I think you used “questioning look” twice. Second, the cleaning scene was a little long. I think you could shorten it, I understand the purpose of it but it did feel long. Overall, though, this section was good.

@ellette-giselle

Your welcome, and thank you!

@ellette-giselle

And a braid like this:

@ellette-giselle

Here’s the dress: