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TheShadow replied to the topic WIP: (A.D. 60. Two friends in Ancient Rome.) Questions in the forum Historical 5 months ago
Apparently my thing didn’t post (gee, thanks Wyoh) but I think changing the fountain scene like Trailblazer and Savannah said sounds good. I thought the scene was fun though.
Oh NO!! I did! That’s awfull!!! That is so, so bad!! Ahhh!! (Maybe I overreacted, but that is a REAL pet peeve of mine!) Thank you for catching tha…
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TheShadow replied to the topic Art Challenge! in the forum Art 5 months ago
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TheShadow replied to the topic WIP: (A.D. 60. Two friends in Ancient Rome.) Questions in the forum Historical 5 months ago
So far, I was interested in what was happening in the book and what would happen next. Here are a few things I noticed though:
When you explained the setting and time, I think it could be done as maybe a prologue or background before the book begins (like in an “intro” or “a note to the reader” type of thing).
I noticed also th…[Read more]
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TheShadow replied to the topic Book Club 🙂 in the forum Book Discussions 5 months ago
Thank you, and I’ll put in a suggestion soon!
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TheShadow replied to the topic Art Challenge! in the forum Art 5 months ago
Thanks!
Thank you, and this challenge was super fun, it really helped with over coming my drawing block (also I think how I replicated the feet is because I’m a bit of a perfectionist lol).
All of your drawings were great, and congrats Loopylin!!
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TheShadow replied to the topic Art Challenge! in the forum Art 5 months ago
Alright, sorry this took so long and that the paper is smudged, but here’s my drawing of Charles:
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TheShadow replied to the topic Book Club 🙂 in the forum Book Discussions 5 months ago
Hello! I think it’s really cool you guys have a book club going on and was wondering if I could participate in the next book discussion (whatever it is).
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TheShadow replied to the topic Couple RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 months ago
ELDRED
Eldred and Rosalind listened to the humans and other creatures talk, but ultimately got lost after the girl named Joy began talking about a place called “America” and things such as “the internet” and “pumpkin spice lattes”.
“This is a strange place.” Eldred whispered to Rosalind. “Yes, but everyone here appears to be fri…[Read more]
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TheShadow replied to the topic Art Challenge! in the forum Art 5 months ago
I’m almost done with the drawing, I need to finish one of the hands and the wings first though. I’ll probably submit it by tonight
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TheShadow replied to the topic Hi! in the forum Start HERE 5 months ago
Hello and welcome!! My name is TheShadow (or Shadow for short). I play a bit of piano, draw, read, bake on the weekends, and write in my spare time. My favorite book genres are action/adventure, fantasy, and mysteries (as long as they are well written). I also have a little obsession with cats and knights lol.
Your novel sounds…[Read more]
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TheShadow replied to the topic Couple RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 months ago
Lol yes, I think Sniper and Trevor could definitely be friends. Also the inscription idea sounds good.
A big cabin sounds like a good idea too, maybe it could be at the head of the camp or something.
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TheShadow replied to the topic My short story in the forum Short Story Critiques 5 months ago
Great job!!! Your story felt so authentic and real, it was amazing!!! You could definitely turn it into a novella but I really like it too as a short story too, so either option would work well.
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TheShadow replied to the topic Ultimate KP Novel in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 months ago
Oh nice!! Well, the results are interesting, so this ought to be a lot of fun. I haven’t read Mistborn though.
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TheShadow replied to the topic Couple RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 months ago
@princesachronicle22 @rae@keilah-h @theducktator
I’m back, and I’ll try to catch up and add something at the end.
TREVOR
“Considering we all have our weapons, imprisonment seems unlikely.” The female duck said. “I am Her Imperial Majesty, Queen Natalie Mallard, Supreme Ruler of All Ducks and Enemy of All Who Eat Duck. My introduction is a lot…[Read more]
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TheShadow replied to the topic Couple RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 months, 1 week ago
Thanks so much, I hope you have a good vacation too!
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TheShadow replied to the topic Couple RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 months, 1 week ago
ELDRED
“We don’t know a Damien. At least I don’t.” Sniper looked at Huntress.“You ever taken a job with ‘im?”
“No. We worked for a pair of brothers, but they’re dead now.” So they are not enemies, and no one else appears to be… so far. Eldred sheathed his sword but made sure to keep his guard up.
“I’m Trevor Henson, and this is…[Read more]
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RAE and TheShadow are now friends 5 months, 1 week ago
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TheShadow replied to the topic Couple RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 months, 1 week ago
Ah, that makes sense now.
First Azalea POV ever lol)
TREVOR
Trevor watched a couple, most likely hunters judging by their appearance, talk with two humanoid but also not human creatures. “Trevor, have you ever seen… ducks with swords on any of your adventures?” Azalea whispered. “I hope they don’t think I’m rude for staring…[Read more]
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TheShadow replied to the topic Couple RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 months, 2 weeks ago
Love the drawing lol.
ELDRED
Eldred stepped out the door and kept his sword ready for any attacks. He quickly surveyed the area, and for a moment wondered if he was seeing right. There were a few people, mainly humans, though two had pointed ears and looked different than humans, and one’s arm was glowing. And two others were ducks…[Read more]
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TheShadow replied to the topic Couple RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 months, 2 weeks ago
TREVOR
“Show yerselves, ya mongrels, or I’ll scatter bits of ya all over four counties!”
“Scatter me across four counties, huh? Hah! I’d like to see you try!”
Can a guy not get sleep around here? Trevor thought groggily as he sat up and rubbed his eyes. Wait, where am I? He looked around and spotted Azalea.
“Wake up.” He said, crawling…[Read more]
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