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Koshka replied to the topic Sing of Tomorrow in the forum Poetry Critiques 4 years, 9 months ago
It’s fine! =)
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Koshka replied to the topic Hello!! in the forum Start HERE 4 years, 9 months ago
I think it ate my tag.
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Koshka replied to the topic Hello!! in the forum Start HERE 4 years, 9 months ago
I’ll have to do something like that… Soon.
How long have you been writing verse? My first ‘poems’ were practically sets of rhyme and meter with nothing much in the way of meaning. They were TERRIBLE!
Maybe that’s why I don’t like jellybeans.
Ooo, that’s hard. I’ve read so many good books. Maybe Myles and Gascone from Men Of Iron, Shasta,…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Characteristic Lines in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 9 months ago
@elishavet-pidyon Ha! I love those lines! They’re witty!
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Annabelle replied to the topic Hello!! in the forum Start HERE 4 years, 9 months ago
Hi, @koshka!
Ugh, I know how that is having so many story ideas and not being able to complete any of them. I’ve had that problem for many years, and just recently I decided to sit down and FINISH a book. I just had to keep myself determined.
Yeah, my poems are pretty direct, and I think they’re more of rhymes than poems because they don’t use…[Read more]
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Annabelle replied to the topic Hello!! in the forum Start HERE 4 years, 9 months ago
@anatra23
I actually don’t use online courses. Basically, I just pick out a song I want to learn and print out sheet music for it (or learn it by ear, depending on if I want a specific arrangement or not.) I do have a few books that I use too. -
Koshka replied to the topic Hello!! in the forum Start HERE 4 years, 9 months ago
@annabelle
Hello there! I am Koshka, or at least that’s what I’m called around here. *gasp* Another Homeschooler… Hi!
You are publishing your first book? Awesome! I have yet to complete ONE of my many story idea, so not even close to where you are.I love poetry too, both writing and reading. My verse is rarely as direct as your Reading Poem.…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Sing of Tomorrow in the forum Poetry Critiques 4 years, 9 months ago
Is this better?
Here voices scream, ‘You’re still in pain,
This Dream and Hope are all in vain.’
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Koshka replied to the topic Sing of Tomorrow in the forum Poetry Critiques 4 years, 9 months ago
Thank you! My verse is just starting to feel right, if that makes any sense.
The voices are saying that. Would removing the punctuation clear that up, or do I need to do something else?
(YES, the author appreciates it very much!)
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Wingfeather Saga in the forum Book Discussions 4 years, 9 months ago
Here’s my drawing! I took a picture of the illustration in the second book and colored it in, using the description in the book to figure out what color his feathers were.

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Koshka replied to the topic Sing of Tomorrow in the forum Poetry Critiques 4 years, 9 months ago
Are there any things you would change?
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Koshka replied to the topic Sing of Tomorrow in the forum Poetry Critiques 4 years, 9 months ago
@elishavet-pidyon @jodi-maile
Thank you! I loved writing it.
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Annabelle replied to the topic Wingfeather Saga in the forum Book Discussions 4 years, 9 months ago
Yeah, I’ll do some more research on it when I have the time. Thanks for the encouragement. 🙂
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Koshka started the topic Sing of Tomorrow in the forum Poetry Critiques 4 years, 9 months ago
Song/poem I just wrote. I don’t know if it’s any good. It would be sung be a captive.
Sing of Tomorrow
My yesterday was full of fears,
Today is always drenched in tears,
But I’m still singing-
I want to see Tomorrow again,
Show me Tomorrow again.
The years have slowly ground away,
And night was gaining day by day,
Yet I kept…[Read more]
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Annabelle replied to the topic Hello!! in the forum Start HERE 4 years, 9 months ago
Good point, pen and paper is way more transportable.
Yes, I am the oldest of my siblings. My youngest brother is the only one that shares a lot of the same interests as me. The middle two siblings hate writing. My sister likes to read a little bit, but overall I connect best with my little brother. I forgot to ask: do you have…[Read more]
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Annabelle replied to the topic Hello!! in the forum Start HERE 4 years, 9 months ago
@devastate-lasting
Well, I still handwrite my stories too at first, then for every chapter I finish by hand I type it onto the computer. I know that’s a lot of extra work, but I just like the feel of the pen in my hand.I have three siblings; one sister and two brothers. Yes, my brother and I are a great team. 🙂
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Annabelle replied to the topic Hello!! in the forum Start HERE 4 years, 9 months ago
Hi, @trahia-the-minstrel!
I’m so glad you liked my blog. It took me a long time to put that post together, and I have to update it every so often because I read so many books. Yes, Viking Quest is so good! I had to read it because I had like a bazillion friends who recommended it.
Wow, that’s great that you’ve been homeschooled your whole life.…[Read more]
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Annabelle replied to the topic Hello!! in the forum Start HERE 4 years, 9 months ago
I do like to design fashion, although it’s a more recent interest of mine so I don’t know a lot about it yet. Basically, all I do is search variations of “modern fashion design” on Google, then use some of the ideas to create my own.
Yeah, old fashion is kind of a good thing to research for world-building. I do that sometimes…[Read more]
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Annabelle replied to the topic Wingfeather Saga in the forum Book Discussions 4 years, 9 months ago
Okay, thanks, @elishavet-pidyon. I’m thinking of writing a story about more creatures like Artham, so I was wondering if there was already a name for that kind of species or if I’ll have to make one up myself.
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Annabelle replied to the topic Hello!! in the forum Start HERE 4 years, 9 months ago
@devastate-lasting
Well, I’m homeschooled, so all of us do some sort of writing activities for school. But other than that, not really. My little brother is just the most similar to me. He loves reading and writing. He handwrote his book, but I had to have him read it to me right away after he wrote it because I knew it would be pretty hard to…[Read more] - Load More
