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Koshka replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 week, 5 days ago
Well of course I’m reading it. XD
Ooooffffff I knowwwww. Hurting the poor babies hurts us too…
A threat?
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Hmmm…
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Power replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 5 days ago
I’M A GUY WITH SISTERS!!!!
She would have turned inside out, hit the roof, and had a hysterical conniption fit all at once!
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Koshka replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 5 days ago
I think you can go ahead and give the prompt whenever you want.
And I vote for one word. It makes things so much more interesting in my opinion.
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Power replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 5 days ago
BWAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHHAHAHHA!!!!!
95%
(It would have been 100% if Electro Duder had at the end had stuck something green and slimy on the girl neck!!!!)
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Koshka replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 week, 6 days ago
Okay! I finally got to read through this so far. Here’s my thoughts:
1) Joseph is a dear little boy who might need to be protected from his author.
2) You tend to rely a little heavily on Telling over Showing. For instance, you saying he is struggling with nightmares is unnecessary, since I can see that well enough from his POV…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 week, 6 days ago
@ellette-giselle wowwwwww
That is so cool!!
My dad designs houses, so if I ever want him to make me a house, I’m gonna ask him to put one in there.
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Koshka replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 6 days ago
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Koshka replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 6 days ago
That is awesome. I wonder if our ancestors fought with, or against each other… XD
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 6 days ago
@ellette-giselle THAT WAS AWESOME.
I have like zero records of my family history lol. My dad is trying to find some information on his family tree, but there isn’t much to go by. I guess his ancestors didn’t keep a lot of genealogical records.
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Koshka replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 6 days ago
I did think it was funny. I also thought it was gross. Quite gross. Grossly gross. But it was funny.
Still wondering how y’all come up with stuff like that though.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 6 days ago
@koshka thanks!!
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Koshka replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks ago
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Koshka replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks ago
Oops, sorry. I’m doing Spanish homework and my brain is officially frying.
We need good books in both YA and MG genres.
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Koshka replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks ago
*Cackles*
*Cough cough*
Excuse me.
You see, I’m starting to fall in love with writing for kids. Or maybe I did a long time ago and I’m just now figuring that out. Either way, it’s a topic I’m passionate about. This world is a dark place for kids, for anybody, and it’s just going to get darker in these last hours before Dawn. Kid’s…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks ago
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Koshka replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks ago
Awesome. I like their tails in the wind.
Yeah, I had thought of a general short story to do, but it didn’t happen. Maybe I’ll stick it here later, maybe I’ll just let it grow moss in the back of my mind until it ends up in some WIP quite by accident.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks ago
here you go!
my charries confronting each other on top of a train. Inspired by the hurricane that hit Florida last month; the wind sounds reminded me of what it would be like standing on top of a fast moving vehicle such as a train, so I drew this. Then I wrote a scene for why they were confronting each other, and then I revised it a…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks ago
Oooo, sure!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks ago
I also have the drawing I based the original scene off of if anyone wants to see it.
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Koshka replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks ago
Ah, I understand. I mostly wrote MG now, but there was a time I stepped back, looked at my writing, and was just like “Teens won’t read whatever this is, but is sure can’t be for kids.”
But then learned a few things and grew a little more, and you know what? It’s okay. Kids live in a dark world too. It’s a matter of perspective. Their…[Read more]
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