@thelobsterlover
Active 1 year, 5 months ago- Rank: Charismatic Rebel
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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 6 months ago
I can see that…lol
Does she ever come around to anything more than tolerating him?
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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 6 months ago
@evelyn-collins so when Hemlock “properly introduces” Leo and Cross…….do you think she’ll hate her father at first for a while, or will she forgive him pretty early on?
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Keilah H. replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
@grcr ahh ok makes sense!!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 6 months ago
@evelyn-collins ouch, sounds like it must’ve hurt then
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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 6 months ago
Thanks!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 6 months ago
Crosshair is all silver, but Leo has a bit of blue on her spines….Also, Cross has a few scars and several of his tail spikes are snapped off due to all the torture he’s received.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 6 months ago
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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 6 months ago
Oh, and I like your planet/moon names.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 6 months ago
@evelyn-collins There’s one thing about Hemlock telling Leo the news that you’d have to put in the story beforehand.
If she’s with him, he’s most likely already experimenting on Crosshair, and shows him to her while he’s locked up (or being tortured….😬……sounds like Hemlock to do that though). Since the Empire confiscated his armor when they…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
@grcr great job!!
One question: Where and in what time period is this supposed to be set? Because you refer to them as warriors and have them fight with old-style weapons, implying either a past or far future time period, but then refer to car accidents and computers (which I assume are computers like the one I’m typing to you on) like it’s set…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Adventure (Formerly Character Party) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
Snake
Snake wheeled around one last time and landed in front of the castle, careful not to throw Carrie or the little creature off as his talons touched the floor. He didn’t want her getting upset with him for hurting her or her pet….he’d prefer to have a human around to explain things if they came across a group of dragon…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 6 months ago
@evelyn-collins forgot about Hemlock haha
he’d actually be perfect for it.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 6 months ago
oh btw I just drew this picture of Leo and Cross as dragons today, I haven’t actually finished and colored them but wanted to show you as soon as I got close to being done.
Both have toothpicks in their mouths lol, and yes, Crosshair has a snake tattoo on his arm.

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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 6 months ago
wow that was a rant lol
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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 6 months ago
@evelyn-collins I sure do!!
Ok, before we get to Leo’s reaction, we should probably talk about the reveal itself. Who tells her? Crosshair himself? Varian saying something along the lines of “I’m the only one who cares about you! Your mother obviously didn’t care, and look where your father is now!” Perhaps Rampart, trying to convince her to go…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 2 years, 6 months ago
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
@whalekeeper lol that’s funny
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Koshka replied to the topic How To Write Christian Fantasy-Putting God In The Mix in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 2 years, 6 months ago
I suppose I refer to death, eternal life, ect. in the trilogy more than actually happens. My characters get in some tight circumstances (like pretty much every other character out there).
There are only two deaths which actually happen to important characters (no MCs die in this series, although one is getting pretty close to it.…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Adventure (Formerly Character Party) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
@rae wow that’s a lot
but hey, I do it to my characters all the time lol
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 2 years, 6 months ago
@loopylin nice job!
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