@thelobsterlover
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Koshka replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
Oops, sorry. I was waiting for class to start and in a hurry, so I wasn’t thinking through my writing.
What I meant was, do your characters need to make the right choice? Or should they mess up a couple times, possibly showing that God can work through even our mistakes, and working on character flaws. Although, you did already…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
Hmm.
Could you use this to portray a character flaw? Idk exactly what you have in mine for flaws though.
Hmmmmm…
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 year, 7 months ago
@rae lol
funny enough I delete a lot of my search history. All they’ll find is a bunch of tf2, star wars, and how to train your dragon stuff. Which might land me in hot water considering two of those are war-related properties, but other than that I think I’d actually be off the hook for a lot of allegations.
but yeah that doesn’t mean I don’t se…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 year, 7 months ago
……some of those seem like they were directed at me
(they probably weren’t lol but I get like that where I incorrectly attribute something to being my fault and it almost never is)
I laughed though.
and the tiny froggo is pure gold!!
also what’s with your signature?
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 7 months ago
@freed_and_redeemed First off, these boards are cool and the characters look amazing.
Second, what a weird coincidence in your name and role selection for the female character—“Jaelryn” is weirdly close to “Jaylen,” the name of a character I have whose codename is Huntress. Her hair’s a bit shorter and darker than your character’s, and her eyes…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 7 months ago
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Koshka replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 year, 7 months ago
Okay, here’s a few. I was also told that Zlatin Vratisin is a lot like somebody named Balian…except that I was also told not to watch that movie… *is concerned for my character*

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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 7 months ago
I’ll study the original artist’s scattered drawings and see if I can throw together a rough timeline.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 7 months ago
@thearcaneaxiom I guess. Also it’d fit the video game characters who are the main players in the crossover, who all come from games set on Earth in the time periods between 1960 and 2020. So they don’t have to change too much, but neither are they the same.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 7 months ago
Yup, even if the relationship is kind of distant.
He’s kinda the same.
I thought about killing off the parents, but Barnes has enough sadness already, and I felt it would be appropriate to give her a family to support.
Lucky Barnes, your author lets you have good things. Sniper’s parents will be dead halfway through the storyline and…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 7 months ago
Either you have a connection to supernatural powers, or I’m just very predictable
Nah, you’re just that predictable. No offense, if our roles were reversed and you came to me with a Bad Batch or Team Fortress fanfic idea, I’d react pretty much the exact same way.
Cool! So is this in any way parallel to the actual Avatar canon, a…
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 7 months ago
XD
Leo
He bit back a grin. “Like they always say, it’s not save to jump out of a moving vehicle.”
The lorry door whooshed open. Silvia led the group aboard, waving their bus card under a the scanner. Leo helped Rory up the steps as inconspicuously as possible. The lorry was mostly empty this early in the morning. Their few…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 7 months ago
Silvia
Spangled darkness in a thousand colors. Gleaming nebula. White dwarfs.
Silvia blinked away the swirling images. Another time maybe. She’d fly again. She shrugged.
“Just wondering. Not many people around here have.”
She turned her head, catching the distant rattling of the bus coming up the street. A sigh brushed past…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 7 months ago
-Me being chronically inactive cause I’m about to serve a mission
-Someone mentions Avatar
-Me, breaks through the ceiling falling before you
I am here
AHAHAHA how did I know you were gonna do that?
Not sure what issue you would have…although there is one note I personally don’t like is the implications of Aang’s past lives…
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 7 months ago
@grcr oh man, that looks awesome!!!!
What program is that?
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Koshka replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 7 months ago
Wow. I love the personality of each character (especially the girl hanging off the banister). And the texture on the leaves is gorgeous.
*continues to stare at picture wondering what the characters are like*
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 7 months ago
@stephie that’s good!! I’m glad!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 7 months ago
@linus-smallprint Yes, I liked the raccoon deer too! His name is Lieutenant Bites. He’s not my design but I just had to draw him cause he’s so cool.
One of the characters in the story I drew him for rides him around.
Wolves are always bad guys, and since they are my favourite animal, I wanted to change things up a bit.
Yesss I feel this way…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 7 months ago
Leo
Listening to Rory’s pain filled breathing made Leo’s own throat ache. He shifted to take more of the kid’s weight.
Then they were on the pavement outside the apartment complex. Another five halting steps deposited them on the bench at the bus stop. Leo let out a gust of air.
“Sorry kid. You probably shouldn’t be out of bed…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 year, 7 months ago
@linus-smallprint Those are perfect! Your characters even look kinda similar to their counterparts!
Alan looks a good deal less….bookish?…..than Alcatraz (where did he get THAT name anyway? Who wants to be named after an island with a jail on it?) though
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