Miriam K.

@esther

I love the idea! I’ve always been a failure at writing blurbs, but yours sounds like a published book! Oooh, I love Dabir’s moodboard! The quote about time is so sad!

@grcr

It’s okay…I was more concerned about Hugo and Ottoline remaining a “thing”.

You can change your character if you want.

@rae @grcr

Oh, Rae, I meant just the next POV for the current RP! But that’s fine, it would be fun to do a new one!

We could have it so the characters at the “party” get teleported to the world via the house’s magical powers. Lol. I know that sounds stupid…but I kind of don’t want to start over, I think it would be fun if the story continues,…[Read more]

Oh and if you want to know spoilers, I will gladly indulge. XD Plus, Amir has a love interest if anyone wants to hear about that… 🥰

Arsyn Dabir’s moodboard…

Amir’s moodboard…

@euodia-vision @freedomwriter76 @lightoverdarkness6 @mineralizedwritings @savannah_grace2009 @rae @spinner4him @smiley @grcr @hybridlore @whalekeeper @anyone-else-that-might-be-interesed

Ok… I’m so excited because I’m finally sharing my WIP idea for NaNo!!!

I think it’s the only WIP that I’ve actually put a lot of thought into before actually…[Read more]

@euodia-vision

Ooooh, what is this NaNo WIP???

Wellll…

I won’t explain it all now because I’m planning to share more about it later today. So I’ll tag you then. 😊

@savannah_grace2009

Oh yeah, that’s a really good idea! I’ll have to keep that in mind. 🙂

@rae

. While Rishona may grow angry, I doubt in such a perfect world she would try to slap someone with no respect. If Elysium is perfect, and the is no pain, there would be no point in slapping someone.

4.Fear is also an emotion I don’t think she could even feel (except the Fear of God) until after she sins. Read genesis 3 aain, and notice tha…

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@grcr

Sounds cool!

@rae

Okay! 🙂

@grcr

Okay, what is your story about? I’m intrigued, your mood boards are really interesting!

@jonas

Is this better?

“Scared you?” The boy smirked. His voice was weak, and his hands trembled a bit, but he lifted his chin, and wet his lips with the determination of a warrior, shaking his mess of black hair out of his eyes. His eyes fell on Ottoline. “That’s low,” he looked at the Traitor. “You’re going to have a girl kill me?” Ottoline…

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@jonas @thearcaneaxiom

GUYS….thoughts on this book cover??? I made it last night and idk if I love it or hate it….

@jonas

So, with Marcurious’ concern that Ottoline will want revenge, maybe you could put that in later, the next time they see each other. It seems odd that Marcurious, while he is suffering from the effects of poison and surrounded by his captors, is worried that a fellow prisoner might attack him. He doesn’t even have to notice her, given the…

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@whalekeeper

It’s just when you spend all your time learning to understand other people, you forget to develop your own sense of self, you know? It doesn’t come as easy.

That’s me when I’ve been writing for too long…

@whalekeeper

BrUH I knOw I look sweet and gentle on the outside, but you ain’t seen my stupid side.

😂😂😂 I feel that, lol

Boys are….boys.

@jonas

Although, would that really be the top of his concerns when he sees Ottoline? Both of them are in prison and she’s only part-Azer, so it doesn’t quite seem logical that he would be legitimately worried about her trying to get revenge. It’s a funny reaction, but it relies a lot on the reader connecting all the dots.

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@rae

lol. A RP is short for role play.