Miriam K.

Heyyy we broke the record!!

Well, we broke the record for the first time in 6 years.

When you put it that way…that makes it sound so much cooler XD

@esther-c

Aww…Lukas has a crush! <333 (so does Liv…lol)

Livia 

“Are you sure? You can tell me anything,” Liv smiled back.

(Sorry I didn’t know what else to have her say, lol)

@rae

Sef

She didn’t know where she was. All she knew was that she wanted to leave.

All around her people were dancing in pairs.

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@savannah_grace2009

Lol, don’t we all? 😂

Oh… gifs don’t work…

XDD

@jonas

Yeeah

Don’t even ask about the time. Idk why it looks like that XDD

Most users ever online was 13 on December 22, 2023 9:52 pm

Almost there guyssss

I’m here….I’ve been excited all day XD

@rae

Ummm…OF COURSE!!! I THOUGHT YOU’D NEVER ASK!!! lol

Should I have her randomly appear in the dance class and be paired with Chase since he’s not dancing with anyone?

@esther-c

I know Abbie Emmons on YouTube loves the three act story structure, so if you want to explore that a little more, I suggest checking out her videos. Especially the one just about the inciting incident. I think she does a pretty good job of explaining it. 😉

I will check it out!! I need all the help I can get…. XD

@freedomwriter76

Girlllll I love your writing so much!! (it almost always makes me tear up but I love it!!!!!)

Does it seem boring?

NOOOO! Definitely not! I was so into it, and I could see everything in my mind!How is the pace?

Can you already begin to see the MC’s struggles/arcs?

A little, I can tell that Riker struggles with guilt and L…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

I mean…it depends on what you mean by the inciting incident….I’m new to plotting XD In a way, Neveah being pregnant is the inciting incident, because it triggers a chain reaction that basically turns Sef’s world upside-down. If that makes sense. I’m not sure about if it is the inciting incident or not….but it is definitely so…

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@mineralizedwritings

Tysm for your help and encouragement!! Every single time someone tells me something they loved about my story it makes me smile 🙂

At the end. I don’t think pregnancy is enough to make somebody have that many issues unless she was also sick, and the buildup made me think her sickness was going to tie into the greater story i…

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Dis is gonna be a breeze 😎

@acancello

You’re not the only one! We eat at 5 too, lol.

@trailblazer

I love it sooooooo much!!! LIBBIE HURRY UP AND SAY YOU’LL MARRY HIM!!!! AHHHH!! lol!

#LALBERT

@mineralizedwritings

Oh yeah, that’s something I easily forget about. Thanks for reminding me! I’ll definitely keep that in mind as I write and edit. 😊

@savannah_grace2009

Alrighty! Here we go!

1. Is it boring?? I’ve been really scared that this doesn’t draw you in and isn’t interesting.

Um, I wouldn’t say it’s boring. I think the pacing is pretty good. Honestly, boring is so subjective, so no, it’s not boring. Because I don’t mind things moving a little slower at the beginning. Some people m…[Read more]