TheArcaneAxiom

@jonas

I don’t think it understands that that would kill him lol

@highscribeofaetherium

Wait, did that sword just try to get Zahlin killed?!?!?!

@rae

Whaaaaaaaaa- you’ve never forged a sword or anything?!? Jk lol.

This is going better than expected so far 😅 they’ve lasted a whole paragraph!

Zahlin

Zahlin narrowed his eyes at Nahim. He didn’t trust him, especially when he had threatened murder within the past hour.

You should dump the whole thing in. The Sword suggested hopefully. I’d…[Read more]

@rae

Oh! Nahim could get Nora’s ring, since that is magical and make swords that can be controlled by it. They wouldn’t be sentient or rational, but they would half wield themselves, making it easier for the newcomers. Good or bad?

It doesn’t effect my characters, so I don’t care. It might go well with what I just said.

It might make sense that characters with less skill would be given them to compensate, so if @trailblazer, @acancello, and/or @esther-c want crystal swords for their characters, that would work.

@rae

Okay. But I think he should only make the crystal swords if there are people who specifically want their character to get one. Mine won’t, because they’re swords are already about as good.

@highscribeofaetherium

Yeah, lack of gunpowder would make guns impossible, and the crystals for those swords are supposed to be rare, and probably wouldn’t exist in Lillen at all.

@jonas

*chokes* That would… yeah, if we can think of an excuse, we probably should.

The Lillenings probably wouldn’t have the materials, right?

@rae

Personally I’d rather the don’t make any of those, because they would totally make other weapons obsolete. I’d rather not write Ellis and Kate wielding guns, lol.

@keilah-h

Bye!

@rae

Oof, that’s the worst 🙁

Wait, so they can just make more??

@rar

But if he makes those than why would any of the characters use other weapons?

@rae

That’s never happened to me, but I’ve seen a lot of people mention that happening. Copying it first seems like a good safeguard, but you’ll have to reapply an italics/bold.

Training would be pretty short if they had guns XD

“Pull the trigger and point it at whatever you want to die.”

@jonas

Machine guns 😎

@keilah-h

Yes, he has human-like weapons, and advanced ones at that. Pistols, shotguns, grenades, the like. He can also freeze his enemies with icebreath or whip them with the six sharp spikes on the end of his tail. Or punch them.

Yep, that’s a very different fighting style. Does he use older weapons like swords or spears? I doubt the L…[Read more]

@thearcaneaxiom

Nice! Would this actually count as a full short story? I couldn’t detect any full plot, but maybe it’s there. One piece of advice my writing teacher gave us for our short story assignment was ‘make sure you write a short story and not just a scene.’ Putting aside whether it counts as a short story, it’s a really good snapshot/…[Read more]

@keilah-h

Oh, yeah, we’re siblings lol

@jonas

Why would you get it if you don’t like it?

IS IT FOR MEEEEE???