TheArcaneAxiom

@hybridlore

Ooooh I like it! tysm!

@freedomwriter76

OH MY GOODNESS….RIKER!!!!!!!!!

poor guy!!!!!

@freedomwriter76

💗 😭 👏Oh my goodness, Riker!!!😭 😭 😭 I love it though, your descriptions are really good!💗

@rae

Scouting missions are essential to any military campaign.

True, but this isn’t exactly a military campaign. They can’t send scouts all the way to all the locations.

@rae

Maybe we should have a map? Or can you at least give us some locations that are on it for some reference?

@rae @esther-c @trailblazer

Okay. Someone else can start, cause I don’t know what to do. I think the last one was a Kari POV. If you need to reference it, you should be able to find it in the doc.

Livia

“Sure!” Liv said, both to going to the mall and staying with Callista. “I guess I do need to find some new clothes, especially a dress for the dance. I didn’t bring a dress, only breeches,” she laughed and tickled Xandro’s chin.

@jonas

Yep. That works

@freedomwriter76 @euodia-vision

Ami 

“Ooh, I like purple,” Ami said with a slow nod. “We should do a dark shade of purple. I think that would look really good.”

She had to admit, she was actually really excited for the dance. Sure, she was going with someone she had never expected to go with, but Clint was wonderful and she was looking forward…[Read more]

@rae @savannah_grace2009

Callista

“No, I just got here. Is there a place to go check in or something? I thought there would be more people around…where is everyone?”

Callista chuckled. “Um… I’m not sure if there’s a place to check in or not. But I have room in my dorm if you want to come stay with me. As for where everyone is… I’m not entirel…[Read more]

@jonas

I’m good with getting back to the heroes now.

@everyone

This seems like a good place to end the villains’ scene, unless anyone wants to do anything still.

@rae @trailblazer @esther-c

Do you want to go back to Nora, Kari, Kate, and Amir planning the scouting missions?

@freedomwriter76

Yw!! 💖💖 Haha, sameeeeee XD (people on KP thought I was 17 or 18! 😆) My friends are all either older or younger. It’s funny, because the 2 friends I’m probably closest to…one is 5 years older than me and the other is 1 year younger than me 😂 And one is a girl and the other is a guy, sooo yeah XD

Same, my friends are amazing <3…

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@rae

Nice! I really like it!

I agree with what everyone else has said, especially that there were a lot of run-on sentences. But overall, it’s really great so far!

@rae

Those are both amazing! (Sorry I missed the one you posted a few days ago, I don’t have notifics activated so I’m likely to miss tags unless it’s something I check on often)

I love this line:

But the hero is the one who bleeds,

Red drops that fall like planter’s seeds.

Great job with both of them!

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Dlek

She won’t get far.

Dlek set about making it look like a fight had taken place. He used his sword to create marks on the walls. Then he shifted some rubble, pretending to get up and groaned. “She got away!” he called through the wall. He heard Zash start raving, but he couldn’t make out any words through the wall.

@hybridlore

Well it’s kind of a long story buuuut…….

While Sef is being abused, Lilitu gets visions of it, but he doesn’t know it’s her. Then he gets these urges from God to help her somehow, but he ignores them because he thinks it’s all in his head.

And then he finds out about her being abused and he feels really guilty because he feels…[Read more]