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HighScribe replied to the topic The Adonial Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 11 months ago
Yeah, ’twas a beeg disaster.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic The Adonial Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 11 months ago
Yeah, I guess when you have multiple genealogies, you shouldn’t go marrying people between them. At least, not multiple times. I think I did that once somewhere in mine, but only once which prevents me from ending up with weird situations like you did.
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HighScribe replied to the topic The Adonial Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 11 months ago
I have no idea. And yeah, it was multiple genealogies, so not everyone should’ve been related, but they were.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic The Adonial Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 11 months ago
Technically in a genealogy, everyone is related. Everyone is the child of the previous person. How exactly did you end up there?
Mine is technically nine genealogies in one, so not everyone on there is related.
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HighScribe replied to the topic The Adonial Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 11 months ago
It was a mess.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic The Adonial Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 11 months ago
Um, what?
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HighScribe replied to the topic The Adonial Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 11 months ago
Like, I mean, I accidentally married cousins together…
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HighScribe replied to the topic The Adonial Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 11 months ago
I tried to make a genealogy, once, just for fun. Everyone ended up being related lol.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic The Adonial Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 11 months ago
I’d love to fill out this geneology completely, but that’s not gonna happen. I calculated that to cover the 20,000 years from the founding of the Eivir to the time that this story is set would require 500 generations, which assuming that each person was an Eivir for 40 years before passing it on, which is most likely nowhere near average.
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HighScribe replied to the topic The Adonial Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 11 months ago
Huh, ok, maybe it’s just me.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic The Adonial Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 11 months ago
Although I guess Latin doesn’t belong in this world…
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic The Adonial Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 11 months ago
Hmm… I didn’t think that was particularly out of place. I would guess it originated from Roman times or something. Let me see…
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It is latin, but it seems that it was actually from the Middle Ages, which means it fits even better.
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HighScribe replied to the topic The Adonial Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 11 months ago
I mostly skimmed it, but the only name I thought seemed kind of out of place was ‘Dominic’. To me, when I hear that name, I think of some punk rebel teenager riding a skateboard, as well as Domino’s Pizza, neither of which are good connections.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic The Adonial Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 11 months ago
@everyone
One thing I could use some help on is the linguistics for this world. If this isn’t your area of expertise, feel free to ignore this. I know that at least @thearcaneaxiom is interested in this topic.
I have a rather gigantic list of essentially just names. I’ll paste them in…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Have fun on your vacation!
Thanks!
I haven’t started drawing anyone yet, so thanks!
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HighScribe replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Ah, I see you folks have created GLORIOUS CHAOS while I was away.
I guess I shouldn’t be surprised at this point.
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Hey, sorry this is late, but I found another reference pic of ottoline (i know it looks nothing like my pfp, but this is a good front view of what she would look like) If you’ve already started drawing her, don’t worry about using this, but just thought I’d give it to you in case you hadn’t started yet.

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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 2 years, 11 months ago
And another Lilitu one!

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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 2 years, 11 months ago
Annnd another Sef one!

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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 2 years, 11 months ago
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