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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic The Adonial Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 11 months ago
I have another question. So I noticed that the letter ‘C’ never makes an ‘s’ sound, but always a ‘K’ sound. Logically, that would mean that between C and K, only one is necessary. But I don’t like the looks of a lot of the words if I change them to the other, and some of them are real names, like Cadmus, which I would rather not…[Read more]
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HighScribe replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Good news, Svlys decided not to punch Klethen in the face!
Svlys
Svlys huffed. Another person who wanted to know her name. “Svlys.” She said snappily, “do not try to say it. You can’t. A simple fix is just don’t talk to me.”
Klethen
“If you wish, Thíya.” Klethen said, bowing, though she was ahead of him, so she couldn’t see him anyways.
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HighScribe replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Klethen isn’t going to push anyone to answer him. Everyone seems pretty out-of-sorts atm. Svlys is considering punching him in the face. He should just be glad none of them speak Shó’liu.
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HighScribe replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Klethen
Klethen was not bothered by Krenna’s decision to ignore him. “So, um, I still don’t know most of your names…” He said.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Krenna
Krenna just glared at him and turned away.
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HighScribe replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Klethen
“Are you always this unpleasant, or are you just in a bad mood?” He asked, annoyed.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic The Adonial Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 11 months ago
I’m doing what you suggested with finding consonant and vowel sounds. Do you happen to know how to write the sound that the ‘j’ in Eojold makes, phonetically? (It’s pronounced like the ‘g’ at the end of ‘garage’ or ‘sabotage.’) I can’t find any info online.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
No, that’s fine!
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Krenna
“Because it’s cold on the surface, idiot!” Krenna snapped. “I don’t care if you don’t like my logic. And it’s your problem if you want to think we’re all about to die!”
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HighScribe replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Klethen
“Your faulty logic is my problem?” He said, “We live on flying cities. We had to flee Them.” He shrugged, finding it impossible to explain. “So… why do you live underground?”
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Krenna
“Well, that’s your problem,” Krenna snapped. “What are you so scared of anyway? And if you don’t live on the surface or underground, where do you live on your world?”
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HighScribe replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Klethen
“That is not logical.” Klethen said flatly.
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I’m kind of disappointed, nobody asked Klethen for a translation XD
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Krenna
“We’re not on my world,” she shrugged. “We live underground there. It would hardly be fair if we were on yours.”
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HighScribe replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Klethen
“We’re not-” Klethen broke off. “How do you know?” He asked suspiciously.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Ellis
Ellis slammed his sword back into its sheath, glancing around. Ottoline was slumped limply on the ground. “You better hope not.” He glowered at Snake, still harboring some ill-feeling even though he knew it wasn’t the hybrid’s fault.
He turned and walked towards Ottoline to see if she was alive.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Krenna
“Relax, nitwit,” Krenna said. “Whatever weird world your from, we’re not on it.”
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HighScribe replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Klethen
“Exactly!” He said, “We’re on the surface!”
Everyone looked at him blankly.
“The surface is Theirs.” He said. What kind of person didn’t know that?
Still, nobody seemed to have any idea what he was talking about.
“Eí deuni choéim veghún iridoní!” He groaned in Shó’liu, hoping nobody was going to ask him for a translation, “Wha…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Krenna
“Isn’t that the best time to panic?” Krenna asked, looking at the man by the window. “And so what we’re above ground? It isn’t too cold.”
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HighScribe replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Klethen
Klethen saw no point in not following the others, so he did. He glanced out a window in passing.
He froze. Oh no.
“Nobody panic,” He said, though he himself was panicking as he turned to the rest of the group, “But we’re all going to die.”
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Izre
Izre didn’t particularly like the idea of blindly following the orders of a disembodied voice, but she didn’t know what else to do, so she trailed after the group. If things went bad, she could just dismember anyone who stood in her way.
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