TheAcornman

@jess-penrose

Well, the version of a synopsis I know is a maximum of 10 page summary of a book that describes the plot, characters, message, world and the writer’s thoughts. Soooo… I assume these are slightly different things in Australia. That’s all.

That’s my definition of a synposis too…I mean, that’s a good reason for writer’s to hate…[Read more]

@daeus I agree about the last sentence/paragraph thing (and most of what the others said about rewording throughout). I don’t think the whole thing should be dumped, but particularly just the last sentence sounds sort of pushy and/or excluding or something along those lines. If you were to cut it, it might need replacing with something else, but I…[Read more]

@rolena-hatfield That’s great! It’s really cute. 😀

@raevynstar I must decline (way too much going on 😉 ), but I hope you get the help you need.

@raevynstar Cool. 🙂 I’m in Southern Ohio.

@emily wait is that peter?? I feel ya, and no I don’t have any suggestions it’s mostly trial and error for me. 🙁 😉

@catwing I’m confused.

@catwing to crazy? whata ya mean, expound my feathered friend.

@raevynstar what’s the word count??

@shannon awww it’s so cute!! Turtles, emu’s palm trees, the beach *falls into a pile of feathers* sorry @catwing

@emily I lovey it!!!

@catwing ahhh unfortunately not, August your 7 months older

@daeus hmmmmmm…… I personally would stick to appealing by genre instead of life struggles…. because in the end the character normally is better (now I haven’t read it all yet sooooo….) but in real life when we finish the book were still the same and it can be kinda depressing. I don’t know if anyone else can relate to that…
I still don’t…[Read more]

@seekjustice do you know who the singer was??? Have fun on your trip *wipes tear* a writing buddy is leaving us guys, she’s leaving us!!!!

@raevynstar Oh…yeah….that would make a Labrador a problem. 😛

@daeus *dances* Yay! Destruction to telling!

@daeus
Well, big thoughts is mainly that you should take out the last paragraph, because although you’re trying to appeal with struggles like that, people might not want to think of themselves as weak or cowardly, if you know what I mean. Maybe they know that subconsciously, but who wants to admit that they are a coward? I mean, a Christian might…[Read more]

@shannon http://regeneratelifefarm.blogspot.com/2017/08/a-child-victorious.html

@jess-penrose XD Yeah, that’s my thoughts. 😀 You might have noticed I have very strong opinions on these things. 😛

@rolena-hatfield I love your blog! Your Attic looks so nice!

@shannon I think you have… it’s called : A Child Victorious