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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 days ago
Yeah, true.
At least it was cold enough that it killed him pretty quick.
Ugh. I sound so heartless and not at all like I was tearing up AGAIN when I edited that scene, even though I’ve been over it more times then I can count.
Anyways.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic EPIC The Musical. Thoughts/rants/and more in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 days ago
YES! That’s the one!!!!
Warning on the animations, a lot of the drawings are bad when it comes to the girls, (but then pictures of greek goddesses are known for having bad clothing)
But yes, that’s it.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 days, 12 hours ago
@ellette-giselle very true, it’s really worse for him.
Freezing to death is a nasty way to go though.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 days, 12 hours ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic EPIC The Musical. Thoughts/rants/and more in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 days, 12 hours ago
Ooo, there is instrumental for some of them.
I’ll check in the morning and shoot it over if there is. I have a collection.
Yes, Athena’s theme is so beautiful! Wait until god Games!!!! 😱
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 days, 17 hours ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 days, 18 hours ago
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whaley replied to the topic Think Twice About Character Death! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 days, 18 hours ago
Oh yeah, I just remembered. I discussed this with another book-reading friend, and that’s why it was in my mind.
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whaley started the topic Think Twice About Character Death! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 days, 18 hours ago
This morning, a list of thoughts suddenly popped into my head. I don’t know why. Maybe because I’ve been reading more books lately. :-]
It’s easy to think a reader’s negative response to a character death is ultimately good. You want them to feel a gut punch, right? You want them to be angry, right? You want them to cry, right? I cannot deny this…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 days, 20 hours ago
lolololol.
The whole not wanting it to happen so not seeing the signs.
btw, it’s Tuesday! Where’s your chapters?!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 days, 20 hours ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 days, 21 hours ago
aha. That makes sense….
And it works. Joseph’s main struggle is dread, and so that book played more off of the dread factor. I wanted you to feel his hopelessness.This is different, so it’s good that it came across different.
Also, I believe you were the one who mentioned Phillip’s section seeming a little out of place.…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 days, 21 hours ago
I have to say, this was probably one of the most exciting sections I’ve ever read in this series.
Wow. This has always been a favorite section of mine but, i must know, why did you say that? What makes this one stand out so much?
Not Roland? I know he just got married, but that man loves hunting, and its not like he’s goi…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 days, 21 hours ago
Thank you!
I know!!!! POOR ROLF!
Did you see it coming with the foreshadowing earlier that day?
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 days, 22 hours ago
@freed_and_redeemed @hybridlore @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @liberty @linus-smallprint
NEXT SECTION!
“We need more meat,” Rolf said. He and several others were sitting about in the main cavern, eating breakfast.
“Are we running low again?” Julian asked.
“Yes, and we’ve hunted this area clean.”
“Then let’s pla…
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 days, 22 hours ago
@ellette-giselle ngl “We’ll never know” is better than explicitly saying they died to me.
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Ruth replied to the topic Anyone else doing Crazy Editing Week? in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 days, 23 hours ago
Nice to see I won’t be alone 🙂
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Ruth replied to the topic Character Interviews in the forum Characters 2 days, 23 hours ago
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Ellette Giselle started the topic EPIC The Musical. Thoughts/rants/and more in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 days ago
@anybody-else-who-wants
Hello. Thought I’d make a topic for this so we don’t take over the other forums.
So, here’s the discussion spot for EPIC The Musical!
Feel free to ask questions of others, put out some thoughts, pick favorite characters, post EPIC memes, interesting history, etc. etc. etc.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 days ago
Congratulations!!!!!
*Is promptly buried and drowns in the confetti*
ugh. Now I’ll have sparkles in my coffin.
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