The Bean

@Daeus ha. 😀 Done. I’ve forgotten it already.

(Matthew thanks you).

Awesome @Dragon-Snapper. I’m afraid I didn’t get much of anything. 468. *sigh* It might be because I reeeeaaaaaaallllllllyyyyyyyy want to get to the next scene… and my brain doesn’t want me to. 😛

What did you get @Daeus?

@Daeus I’m on.

Ugh @Dragon-Snapper I can’t stand Snoke. *shudder* I’m glad you find him intriguing, though. The more you find intriguing, the more you have to look forward to. 😉

@Anne-Swiftblade that would have been neat too… revealing his face just then. But then you might have an overbalance of mystery. Not to mention we only really start getting seriously…[Read more]

Yeah, I kinda like that too. But I don’t think that’s how it’s going to turn out, what with all the mystery and stuff in her backstory. :/

Oh and Hannah, yes. Finn did change the way I saw Stormtroopers very much.

@His-Instrument @Daeus I totally agree with everything that has been said. (Like you needed my stamp of approval. I’m giving it anyway).
And yes, Hannah, I totally root for Gollum. Don’t worry. We’re weird together. 😉

The thing I’m most worried about with Ren is the general incompetence of script-writers. (I know. So cynical). This character…[Read more]

*tries to communicate**finds no phone**pouts*

@Dragon-Snapper

@Bluejay this is really interesting. I’ve never read a poem quite like this before, but I like it. Nothing really to point out. Great job.

Okay great @Bluejay. I got 1,020 words written, and I was working on a dream-sequence, so I’m pretty happy. 😛 Those are kinda tricky. 😉

What did you get, @Dragon-Snapper? *folds claws primly* I didn’t waste my time melting up the plastic seats, dear fellow dragoness.

Oh, well in that case… um… eh… for gentleness…compassion on the wounded? Healing in your hands?
And for self-control… um… disciplined wisdom? Rule over your spirit?

@Bluejay

Sorry @Bluejay I’m stuck. The ones you have sound good. What’s wrong with them?

@Bluejay, actually, I can!! Ready, set go! When will you be writing till? I can write until nine our time, like usual.

Ok. New statement. He is my all time favorite villain ever.

@Daeus I think it’s safe to say I concur. And even if it isn’t… I concur.

OH MY GOODNESS SOMEBODY ELSE FEELS LIKE I DO!!!!!!!! Seriously, I’d given up hope.

Seriously, he might just be my all time favorite villain ever.

I concur. Most vehemently. With everything you said. Don’t let me start ranting; I’ll never finish.

One other clever thing they did with him (though it doesn’t have much to do with his character) is…[Read more]

Hmm, do you think it will look good in the review section on the back of a book?

No.

And I like that last one quite a lot. I think that works, definitely.

@Hope

I can’t believe I missed this!!!! Aauuuugggghhhh!!

Anyway, here I am. Hello and welcome, @TheLiteraryCrusader. This is a beautiful, wonderful, magnificent, inspiring, friendly, cheerful*coughcough* Okay, enough with the adjectives. This is an awesome place and I’m thrilled that you’re going to be a part of it. Welcome to Kingdom Pen!

@Hope I’m with @Daeus… I like the longer one better because it connects me to E better, but the second one is much more concise. *shrugs* I honestly can’t choose between them. And I think you could probably do away with the bolded words altogether— the blurb is most effective as a peep into the MC’s life, as the MC’s life (very rightfully) is…[Read more]

Eh… dear dear @Daeus. Couldn’t you at least have used poison? It’s so much more Monte Cristo-ish. 😀

*clears throat primly* Excuse me sir, was that a death threat?