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@that_writer_girl_99 really?!? That’s so cool! May I ask what about Star Wars inspired you particularly?

*shakes head* You guys… XD

@That_Writer_Girl_99 YAY!!! *tackles you and smothers you in blankets and pillows* We knew you could do it! Way to go! *fuscia confetti*

@that_writer_girl_99 *raises eyebrows* Don’t you ‘but mom’ me! Go to your room, or I’ll melt the pictures and your chair.

@winter-rose @that_writer_girl_99 mind if I jump in? A certain character of mine needs a serious interview right now 😉

@Dragon-Snapper lol! XD

@That_Writer_Girl_99 nope. Not yet. I want to get him good and proper in my head before I try it. 😉

@anne-of-lothlorien @kate-flournoy @graciegirl @that_writer_girl_99
*motherly voice* If you all don’t share your toys, I’ll take it away from you, the easy way or the hard way. Easy way is that you just share it, the hard way is I melt the pictures and no one has them. Be nice. 😛
😉

@That_Writer_Girl_99 yep. And thoughts are actually the least necessary of those three. Oftentimes I just cut them out and let the actions tell the story. Emotions and actions go a long way to cluing people in on what someone’s thinking. 😉 😛

Yeah… maybe it means easy as eating pie? XD

@That_Writer_Girl_99 *hugs you*

@that_writer_girl_99 What about the beginning confused you? What do you think could be done to make it more clear?

@That_Writer_Girl_99

I didn’t write that, and I don’t think I can right now. I’m not that good.

*wise Yoda look* That— is why you fail.

*goes off into gales of smothered laughter* Okay, okay… so it’s not that drastic. I have a reputation to live up to apparently, though, so… *shrugs*

No, you’ve got enough humility to sink a ship.…[Read more]

@that_writer_girl_99 Signing off. I got a chapter edited. Hope you get your breakthrough.

@kate-flournoy See ya.

@That_Writer_Girl_99 Ahhh… yes. You’re POV telling. That makes it boring and dull; you’re right. See, what you’re doing is giving us Kara’s thoughts instead of showing us her emotions through the way she acts. Instead of doing this:

That was strange. I think to myself as I—finally—enter my cell. I wonder what Matthias was talking about?
I tak…

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@That_Writer_Girl_99 Yyyyyes???

@that_writer_girl_99 I was helping Josiah with something. Worthy excuse.

@that_writer_girl_99 @kate-flournoy Ok, I’m back!

@That_Writer_Girl_99 heh. Yes indeed. 🙂