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Catwing started the topic Finding Secrets~ To Uncover A Synopsis in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 6 months ago
Hello! I am finishing up my book and was working on the synopsis… But I wanted some critiques.
(The first line will be centered)You Were Called By The King
Jack, Alex, Cele, John, Chase, and Amelia are not normal. Even before they met a mysterious messenger, who says they have to save Allore by finding three jewels and giving them to the…[Read more] -
Emma Flournoy replied to the topic The Last Jedi in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 6 months ago
@That_Writer_Girl_99 I see the point. What Kate said about character dynamic-ness and duplicity is right true though.
And honestly though, I think a bunch of my dislike for Luke comes from the bad acting. That he’s really poorly acted makes him a whole lot less…good in every way as a character. Which isn’t Luke’s fault, it’s Mark Hamil’s. XD If…[Read more] -
Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Character/Fiction inspired Typography/Art in the forum Art 8 years, 6 months ago
@Ethryndal Um…I came up with it off the top of my head, yes, though it’s hardly a stunning simile. XD I must’ve just been favored at the moment, because usually when I try to think up an appropriate metaphor—YEAH, I know how hard it is. Ugh. 😛
@That_Writer_Girl_99 *blinks* I don’t pat your head.
@Jane-Maree COOL. Is the girl’s last name…[Read more]
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Jane Maree replied to the topic Writers' Corner #9 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 6 months ago
@That_Writer_Girl_99 @Jessi-Rae @Aislinn-Mollisong @anyone else who’s still here and I’ve overlooked (shame on me)
Hello, hello, and I am here to write. *waves* -
Catwing replied to the topic Writers' Corner #9 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 6 months ago
@jessi-Rae That’s intresting…
@dragon-snapper @aislinn-mollisong @that_writer_girl_99 @salome01w4g @epicaddie2 I’m on until my dad is done mowing. 🙂 -
Snapper replied to the topic Writers' Corner #9 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 6 months ago
@that_writer_girl_99 @aislinn-mollisong I’m off for dinner now. I wrote 830 words. Bye!
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Snapper replied to the topic Writers' Corner #9 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 6 months ago
@that_writer_Girl_99 @aislinn-mollisong I’m going to see how many words I can get down as well. *cracks knuckles* Here we go!
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Aislinn Mollisong replied to the topic Writers' Corner #9 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 6 months ago
@that_writer_girl_99 I’m here! Writing…again.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic The Last Jedi in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 6 months ago
@That_Writer_Girl_99 Imma side with @Ethryndal, but I see where you’re coming from. My sister Elizabeth agrees. 😉
My beans with genuine characters is… if they’re ONLY genuine, they fall kind of flat. They need to be dynamic too, and Luke leaves things to be desired in that area, especially considering he’s the hero.
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Ethryndal replied to the topic The Last Jedi in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 6 months ago

*cough* @That_Writer_girl_99 *cough cough COUGH choke hack*
Okay fine, I see your point. And honestly, he’s probably the most realistic hero of all the teenage heroes, considering he represents the most normal way of life. Leia or Padme or Rey couldn’t whine, because they’d never known any other way of life than hardship. Luke, on the other…[Read more]
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Ethryndal replied to the topic The Last Jedi in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 6 months ago
@That_writer_girl_99 Hey, don’t go cracking down on Grand Moff Tarkin. I once took a Star Wars character quiz, and apparently, I am he.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Character/Fiction inspired Typography/Art in the forum Art 8 years, 6 months ago
@That_Writer_Girl_99 @Ethryndal is right. Let’s just say… world domination is a favorite hobby of mine.
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Ethryndal replied to the topic Character/Fiction inspired Typography/Art in the forum Art 8 years, 6 months ago
@That_writer_girl_99 *pats your head reassuringly* Don’t worry, that’s the effect it has on all of us when Kate reveals her master plan to take over the world. It will pass.
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Ethryndal replied to the topic The Last Jedi in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 6 months ago
@Emma-Flournoy @That_writer_girl_99 Oh yeah, and I felt really awkward because sometimes I *cough* forget that not everyone shares my opinion, and had just said something really scathing about Luke…
*whinily* But I was going to go into Tosche station to pick up some new POWER converters!!!
*cough*
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic The Last Jedi in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 6 months ago
Don’t worry @xonos-darkgrate @salome01w4g, I don’t like Leia either.
@That_Writer_Girl_99 Do you remember, when you’d just recently joined the forum, before you’d even made your introductory topic, you were on some other topic and one of the first things we talked about was Luke? I said I didn’t like him and you said he was one of your…[Read more]
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Louise Fowler replied to the topic The Last Jedi in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 6 months ago
@ethryndal @xonos-darkgrate @that_writer_girl_99 Ah the thread is still alive! Does anyone else feel kinda awkward when no one’s responded for a while and that last post was yours? XD
Luke is scared, because, I’m guessing, Rey is showing as much strength in the Force as someone he’s only seen once before – can you say Ben Solo? It’s a bit strange…[Read more]
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Catwing replied to the topic Writers' Corner #9 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 6 months ago
@aislinn-mollisong @dragon-snapper @seekjustice (I missed them too.) @that_writer_girl_99 (The names are fine I suppose. When I told my dad he said, ‘but haven’t people died fighting for Allore?’ “I can change the name still.” ‘Do they have a flag?’ I told him about the flag. ‘They fought for that flag.’ “Okay I can keep the name.” Yep. He wants…[Read more]
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Ethryndal replied to the topic The Last Jedi in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 6 months ago
@That_Writer_Girl_99 *whinily* Uncle Owen, this one’s got a bad MOtivator!
*ahem*
But we must cut him some slack. Considering one of his students went straight up crazy and started massacring people, it doesn’t surprise me that his mental capacities *cough* (manners) *choke* have finally fled.
*taps fingers sternly* Hmm, very bad, @Daeus, very…[Read more]
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Hannah replied to the topic Writers' Corner #9 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 6 months ago
@that_writer_girl_99 @dragon-snapper @emily @shannon @catwing @anyone else,
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Character/Fiction inspired Typography/Art in the forum Art 8 years, 6 months ago
@That_Writer_Girl_99 AHHH! I’m so sorry! *grovels pathetically*
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