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Elizabeth replied to the topic Writers' Corner #6 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 10 months ago
Yeah.
Honestly, I think it shows how much I’ve learned about character arcs so far. Originally, I had no backstory for Blake, and he was just sort of this flat character that made everything in Kara’s world perfect again. Now that I’ve built his backstory, he’s so much more.
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Elizabeth replied to the topic Writers' Corner #6 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 10 months ago
Well, Matthias is mad at the whole world right now, and Blake is strangely insensitive, which is a quality I didn’t foresee him having… @winter-rose
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Elizabeth replied to the topic Writers' Corner #6 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 10 months ago
You didn’t tag me @winter-rose I’m sad.
Anyway, I’m here now! Have to settle things between Blake and Matthias… *sighs* Those boys.
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Elizabeth replied to the topic Writers' Corner #6 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 10 months ago
I’m signing off now. This writer girl needs some sleep… @winter-rose @jane-maree
@jane-maree I’m praying for your success with your writing thingy! Good luck to you!
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Elizabeth replied to the topic Writers' Corner #6 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 10 months ago
I knew that. I’m…uh. I’m tired. *winces in embarrassment* @winter-rose
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Elizabeth replied to the topic Writers' Corner #6 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 10 months ago
Wait, what?
Ack, sorry! I meant @kate-flournoy …I don’t have a sister named Kate lol. @winter-rose
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Elizabeth replied to the topic Writers' Corner #6 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 10 months ago
Hey, Blake started it… @winter-rose They’ve both been through a lot. Blame my brainstorming sessions with Kate.
Bye! @graciegirl
Oh, oh, oh, oh, stayin alive… *hums frantically and grimaces when her sister looks at her teasingly*
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Elizabeth replied to the topic Writers' Corner #6 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 10 months ago
haha. I know…you’ve been busy, huh? @gracie-girl
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Elizabeth replied to the topic Writers' Corner #6 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 10 months ago
Zikers, Gracie. Get your head in the game, girl! @graciegirl
Here. *hands you inspirational pizza* @jane-maree
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Elizabeth replied to the topic Writers' Corner #6 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 10 months ago
It’s going good! At the moment, Matthias and Blake are arguing. They’re both kinda childish, in Kara’s eyes… @winter-rose
Oh no @jane-maree !! Don’t die, love! It’ll be okay. You’re braver than I…
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Elizabeth replied to the topic Writers' Corner #6 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 10 months ago
*hugs you* Hello, love! How’s it going? @winter-rose
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Elizabeth replied to the topic Writers' Corner #6 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 10 months ago
I took a break to eat dinner, but I’m back now. @kate-flournoy @daeus @graciegirl @jane-maree @winter-rose @everyone-else
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Elizabeth replied to the topic Writers' Corner #6 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 10 months ago
Bye! @graciegirl
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Elizabeth replied to the topic Writers' Corner #6 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 10 months ago
Thank you! I have most of the key points I want to make sure I get to, but I just need to connect them. @graciegirl
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Elizabeth replied to the topic Writers' Corner #6 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 10 months ago
I’m here! Planning out my sixth chapter. @graciegirl @daeus @dragon-snapper
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Elizabeth replied to the topic Writers' Corner #6 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 10 months ago
@kate-flournoy You on?
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Elizabeth posted a new activity comment 8 years, 10 months ago
https://docs.google.com/document/d/16Fp5D7pKF1SwuVVegM6Ke2kz8PuxVSj0qQb8LpaL2UU/edit
Here ya go! If you haven’t already, read through Prison and then let me know if there’s anything that doesn’t make sense. Even if it’s a small detail, I want to know about it. Thanks so much, and no pressure to do it immediately! Do it whenever you have the time…[Read more]
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Elizabeth posted a new activity comment 8 years, 10 months ago
Hello! @emma-flournoy The link to Prison is in a google doc somewhere on one of the forums I’ve created… *looks around* *cN’t find it* Give me a minute to finish lunch and I’ll give it to ya. Thanks for offering to help!
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https://docs.google.com/document/d/16Fp5D7pKF1SwuVVegM6Ke2kz8PuxVSj0qQb8LpaL2UU/edit
Here ya go! If you haven’t already, read through Prison and then let me know if there’s anything that doesn’t make sense. Even if it’s a small detail, I want to know about it. Thanks so much, and no pressure to do it immediately! Do it whenever you have the time…[Read more]
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Coolio. So, things even with stuff like sentence structure and stuff, and specific comments, or just the story stuff and an overview when I’m done?
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Whoops! Sorry I took so long to reply to this. My phone logged me out of KP, and I was too lazy to look up my account login…
Anyway.
Yeah, I mean, if you see a grammatical error that really sticks out to you, as in, one so bad you can’t ignore it, definitely let me know. What I really want to scrutinize here is the character development. I…[Read more]
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Quite all right. 😀
Okay…*clears throat oddly* Well, I’m kinda weird about critiquing anything. I can never decide, if it’s just a minor detail, whether it’s fine to let it go or whether I should make sure I tell you. And then I end up feeling kinda guilty if I don’t say every single thing that comes to mind… *cough* I know, I’m strange. Do…[Read more]
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Do whatever you think necessary! You’re not going to hurt my feelings, Emma, not at all. Even if I come back and the document is criss-crossed with red marks, I won’t be offended. Every comment I get helps me better the story. @emma-flournoy
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@That_Writer_Girl_99 Well, I wasn’t worried about offending you. I’ve learned that authors WANT the full opinion no matter what. 😛 And it doesn’t seem like you’d get offended over what I said. I just didn’t want to be giving you MORE than you wanted, even if it wasn’t offending. 😀 But. I shall begin. Sometime. Soon. *waves*
(And also, I don’t…[Read more]
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Elizabeth replied to the topic Writers' Corner #6 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 10 months ago
I’m here… writing. Thinking. Thinking about stories I’m not even working on. @jane-maree @graciegirl @daeus
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Elizabeth replied to the topic Self-Publishing Panel Discussion in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 10 months ago
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Coolio. So, things even with stuff like sentence structure and stuff, and specific comments, or just the story stuff and an overview when I’m done?
Whoops! Sorry I took so long to reply to this. My phone logged me out of KP, and I was too lazy to look up my account login…
Anyway.
Yeah, I mean, if you see a grammatical error that really sticks out to you, as in, one so bad you can’t ignore it, definitely let me know. What I really want to scrutinize here is the character development. I…[Read more]
Quite all right. 😀
Okay…*clears throat oddly* Well, I’m kinda weird about critiquing anything. I can never decide, if it’s just a minor detail, whether it’s fine to let it go or whether I should make sure I tell you. And then I end up feeling kinda guilty if I don’t say every single thing that comes to mind… *cough* I know, I’m strange. Do…[Read more]
Do whatever you think necessary! You’re not going to hurt my feelings, Emma, not at all. Even if I come back and the document is criss-crossed with red marks, I won’t be offended. Every comment I get helps me better the story. @emma-flournoy
@That_Writer_Girl_99 Well, I wasn’t worried about offending you. I’ve learned that authors WANT the full opinion no matter what. 😛 And it doesn’t seem like you’d get offended over what I said. I just didn’t want to be giving you MORE than you wanted, even if it wasn’t offending. 😀 But. I shall begin. Sometime. Soon. *waves*
(And also, I don’t…[Read more]