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Emma Flournoy posted an update 8 years, 10 months ago
*scrambles with a puff of dust* ALL RIGHT @That_Writer_Girl_99. Looks like I’m at your service for… at least some ticks of the clock. 😉 What would you have me do, fair lady?
Emma Flournoy posted an update 8 years, 10 months ago
*scrambles with a puff of dust* ALL RIGHT @That_Writer_Girl_99. Looks like I’m at your service for… at least some ticks of the clock. 😉 What would you have me do, fair lady?
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Hello! @emma-flournoy The link to Prison is in a google doc somewhere on one of the forums I’ve created… *looks around* *cN’t find it* Give me a minute to finish lunch and I’ll give it to ya. Thanks for offering to help!
https://docs.google.com/document/d/16Fp5D7pKF1SwuVVegM6Ke2kz8PuxVSj0qQb8LpaL2UU/edit
Here ya go! If you haven’t already, read through Prison and then let me know if there’s anything that doesn’t make sense. Even if it’s a small detail, I want to know about it. Thanks so much, and no pressure to do it immediately! Do it whenever you have the time @emma-flournoy
Coolio. So, things even with stuff like sentence structure and stuff, and specific comments, or just the story stuff and an overview when I’m done?
Whoops! Sorry I took so long to reply to this. My phone logged me out of KP, and I was too lazy to look up my account login…
Anyway.
Yeah, I mean, if you see a grammatical error that really sticks out to you, as in, one so bad you can’t ignore it, definitely let me know. What I really want to scrutinize here is the character development. I want to make sure nothing seems too abrupt, that all the different plot details fit together.
…no pressure. *grins* And thanks!
Quite all right. 😀
Okay…*clears throat oddly* Well, I’m kinda weird about critiquing anything. I can never decide, if it’s just a minor detail, whether it’s fine to let it go or whether I should make sure I tell you. And then I end up feeling kinda guilty if I don’t say every single thing that comes to mind… *cough* I know, I’m strange. Do ya think it’d be better if I just read through the document and commented as I go on anything I notice? That’ll take me longer than just reading it and giving general thoughts at the end, but it’ll be more thorough. Also though, that’ll probably mean a ton of comments…for some reason I can’t help noticing tons of things. *facepalm* So whichever way you want is totally fine with me.
And thanks for the emphasis on no pressure, ’cause that’s making me feel less pressure. XD It shouldn’t take forever long as it’s only 36 pages…but I shall endeavor not to stress over it. I’m good at stressing over things. 😛
You’re very welcome. *grins back*
Do whatever you think necessary! You’re not going to hurt my feelings, Emma, not at all. Even if I come back and the document is criss-crossed with red marks, I won’t be offended. Every comment I get helps me better the story. @emma-flournoy
@That_Writer_Girl_99 Well, I wasn’t worried about offending you. I’ve learned that authors WANT the full opinion no matter what. 😛 And it doesn’t seem like you’d get offended over what I said. I just didn’t want to be giving you MORE than you wanted, even if it wasn’t offending. 😀 But. I shall begin. Sometime. Soon. *waves*
(And also, I don’t have a Google account, so I’ll be using my oldest sister Elizabeth’s. (She’s nice like that.) Any comments by Elizabeth Flournoy will be me.