Elizabeth

@jessi-rae no worries! Plenty of time left if you want to be Tuesday’s chosen one.

Wow! Sounds amazing. I’ve read your stuff before and thoroughly enjoyed it, so I’m in.

@rochellaine Ha, you should head down to where I live, then. Plenty of heat here.

Hey~

I’m a little confused as to what you’re asking here. Are you asking about the Biblical soundness of including “humanoid” creatures in your story? Or are you debating the differences between animal and human?

If your question relates to the former, I’d like to ask what impact God has in the world you’ve created. Do your characters actively…[Read more]

Hi there! @allison-grace

A few things to consider here, but first, check out this video: https://kingdompen.org/character-types-the-strong-female-character-tm/

Okay. Now, I’m no expert on this, and without any knowledge of how exactly your MC goes about saying anyone, this might be a shot in the dark, but here’s my advice: make it re…[Read more]

@rochellaine Hi! Welcome to KP.

Where are you from?

http://www.theliterarycrusader.com/ Check this out. I can’t remember Brianna’s tag at the moment, but I’m sure she’d be willing to answer any questions you might have.

@daeus Thanks!

Whew. That took forever… here ya go! @dragon-snapper @daeus

@dekreel Thanks for sharing!

I know this thread is probably intended for original characters, but I have a bunch of Kylo Ren and Rey (mostly Kylo Ren) collages on my phone…would anyone like to see them?

@dragon-snapper @daeus @anyone

Alright, folks! The first newsletter is in the books! Thanks you, everyone, for sharing your advice! @aislinn-mollisong is this week’s winner, but submit more advice for a chance to see your name in next weeks’ email!

@daeus Did you just…acknowledge the fact that you ship Rey and Kylo Ren?

@dekreel Still have any questions? Looks like there’s some good advice here.

…when did we start calling him Broom Boy? What a sad nickname…

Heck yeah, Kylo and Rey! It doesn’t matter if you “ship” them or not, they were amazing. The fight between them and the Guards was my favorite part too.

…and yes. If something happens to poor Kylo Ren, I can assure you that I too will be severely enraged. @ethryndal

Yeah. I love it. @ethryndal

What was your favorite part of the movie? Also, how many times have you seen it?

@ethryndal I’ve missed you.

I agree on the Knights of Ren thing. That’s a very cool aspect of the story that I think deserves more depth.

About the boy at the end…do you think maybe he serves a dual purpose? Perhaps he will be in the next movie, as a little apprentice? Or maybe he’s just symbolizing the rebirth of the Jedi Order? I dunno, but…[Read more]