-
Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 7 months ago
@seekjustice @valtmy @dekreel @catwing Anyone here?
-
Joy replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 7 months ago
@seekjustice Makes sense…
I think I’ll sign off now. Good to talk to you! Maybe I’ll see you tomorrow.
-
Joy replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 7 months ago
@seekjustice It’s tricky! You’re welcome. Yeah, I know what you mean. I’m glad I could help at least a little. 😀
Hey, can you help me figure something out? I’m going to introduce a couple new characters into my Aetherlight roleplay (which is like the Aetherlight version of the KPA) who are sent to Aethasia by… I dunno… their parents?…[Read more]
-
Joy replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 7 months ago
@seekjustice (Sorry it took so long to respond!!) I think you should describe the setting more. I mean, I get the idea that the story is set in futuristic Australia, but I feel like the descriptions aren’t… authentic enough. I don’t know exactly what you’d need to do to improve on it, but basically just make the setting and world more…[Read more]
-
Joy replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 7 months ago
@seekjustice I could really feel the emotion in it. You did well.
May I offer a suggestion? If so, should I do it here? In your doc? Somewhere else?
-
Joy replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 7 months ago
@rochellaine Good night! Hope to see you tomorrow. Earlier in the night would be even better. XD
@seekjustice I’m enjoying your book so far! I just finished reading over Justice’s riot in front of the town hall. It really made my heart pound.
-
Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 7 months ago
@dekreel Cool! I can’t wait to read it!
I will have to wait until tomorrow, though, even if you get it done tonight. I’m leaving now. 🙁
Talk to you later.
@seekjustce Bye!
-
Joy replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 7 months ago
@rochellaine I’ve finished beta-reading and now I’m working on the comical poem prompt you gave me. 😉
@seekjustice I know, you just didn’t know I was here. 😉 Going pretty well!
-
Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 7 months ago
@dekreel Hi!! I’m starting to get sleepy, though. I’ll be here for a few more minutes.
What are you working on?
-
Joy replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 7 months ago
@rochellaine @seekjustice Heyyyy, I’m still here! 😉
-
Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 7 months ago
@seekjustice Do people use satellite GPS in Australia? I know it can still be hard to find something even with that, though.
-
Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 7 months ago
@seekjustice Oh, that’s not too bad. We used to live that far out, except for I think a farmers market or something that was nearby. Nobody visiting could EVER find our house! 😛 We got so many calls from guests, saying “sorry, we’re confused. Where exactly are you?”
Now we live in the suburbs (I think that’s what it’s called) so the sto…[Read more]
-
Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 7 months ago
@seekjustice I’ll give the whole thing away if I tell you, so you’ll have to wait and read it when it’s done. 😉
Nice. 🙂 How far from town do you live?
-
Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 7 months ago
@seekjustice I’m working on a new short story.
What do you do in town besides go to the library?
-
Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 7 months ago
@seekjustice “Gesticulate” from Kismet. In the musical, right before the song, a poet/storyteller is arrested and his hand threatened to be cut off. The guy in charge gives him a chance to argue, and he sings this song about how much his hand is needed in his profession, and why he can’t be a storyteller without his hand. You have to see his ha…[Read more]
-
Joy replied to the topic Character name in the forum Characters 7 years, 7 months ago
@amy-l-klob I found a website with boys names in the 1700s that might help out a little! My favorite names on the list for your character are Abe, Amos, Asa, Eli, Ike, Jed, Oscar, Reuben, Stanley, and Thaddeus. Hope that helps! 🙂
-
Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 7 months ago
@seekjustice Are you at the library yet? I did end up thinking of a song. 😛 For some reason it jumped into my head this evening, and as I realized that I hadn’t told you about it before. It is old, though, so you might not like it. 🙁
-
Joy replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 7 months ago
@catwing They do sound cute!
Don’t you live on a farm? I forgot. If so what kinds of animals do you have?
-
Joy replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 7 months ago
@catwing What kind of goats do you have? (I know nothing whatsoever about goat breeds or anything like that. Lecture me if you wish. 😛 )
-
Joy replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 7 months ago
@catwing You sound busy! I wish my writer life was that lively. 😛
Haha, goats, eh? What’s it like having goats?
- Load More
