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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 1 month ago
Better than it has, not as good as it could be.
That describes a large amount of nearly everything I do… 😀
Yup! Almost done, though. Hooray!
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 1 month ago
@seekjustice Well, I can understand that, but it still implies that he was trying to be romantic, while the rest of the scene (as well as what we know of his character) really doesn’t indicate that at all. The first time he says “romantic” it’s a joke, and a little flirtatious, which is fine, but the second time it just sounds really weird. 🙁 S…[Read more]
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 1 month ago
@skredder Short stories, huh? I love writing short stories! Except…I rarely finish them. 😛 I’ve finished a couple though. How’s it going now?
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 1 month ago
@seekjustice That was not fifteen minutes. That was an hour. 😛 Looks like I’m bad at giving estimates!
But anyway, I’m here now, and it looks like you’re about to leave. 🙁 By the way, I did give you the comment about Justice, but I put it in your document instead of here. Did you get it?
@skredder Hi!
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 1 month ago
@seekjustice Haha! 🙂 Yes, definitely we need to be praying. And no, the world will never learn.
I’ll be departing for about fifteen minutes or so. See you in a bit!
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 1 month ago
@seekjustice @catwing Oh, I hope I didn’t just freak you guys out. 🙁 Sorry! I just heard the news and wondered if you had.
I don’t know if your families talk about big world events like this or not, so maybe I shouldn’t have said anything…
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 1 month ago
@seekjustice @catwing Well, we (the U.S.) just bombed Syria. We’ve been talking with Russia for several days trying to decide whether we want to start WWIII. We don’t know yet what Russia will do in return, since they’re supporting Syria. I think we bombed places, not people, but I don’t know exactly, since it just happened. Our relations wit…[Read more]
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 1 month ago
@seekjustice Hey! I’m finally back. 🙂
How’s it going?
By the way, have you been hearing the world news?
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filewriter@base13x replied to the topic Needs Answers in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 years, 1 month ago
@ariel-ashira. I loved her poem too! Thanks for answering those questions. I have noticed that I need a lot more description in my writing. Agh I really need to work on that. It is good to have a second opinion. Thank you!
Yes, @livgiordano does really good poetry. She did an awesome poem for a story we are coauthoring. It was more like a story,…[Read more]
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 1 month ago
@seekjustice I’d love to word war with you, but unfortunately, I’m having to rewrite that section of my western, so it’d basically be cheating to war with you right now, since I’m half copying off of my old writing! 😛
I think I’m almost done with that, though, so maybe we can war later tonight. (Or later this afternoon I guess…)
Aaand,…[Read more]
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filewriter@base13x replied to the topic Needs Answers in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 years, 1 month ago
Oh, @ariel-ashira, sorry I didn’t answer your question. It is in the future. I imagine it in the late 2000s or maybe even later, but I don’t really have a set date.
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filewriter@base13x replied to the topic Needs Answers in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 years, 1 month ago
@ariel-ashira, thanks! I don’t want to be a pest, but can you answer any of my questions?
Hmm, what do you think @livgiordano ? Do we know each other? Just kidding, yes we do. Quite well actually. At least I think so. Liv is one of my best friends in the world. She’s pretty awesome. *high fives*
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filewriter@base13x replied to the topic Needs Answers in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 years, 1 month ago
@livgiordano. Aw, that’s nice of you to say. Yeah, I would have tagged you too, but you have already read this part and know like the whole plot already. 😁
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filewriter@base13x replied to the topic Needs Answers in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 years, 1 month ago
Oh, and I guess I put the mock cover on there too. I didn’t mean to do that. Oh well, you guys will probably like that anyways.
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filewriter@base13x started the topic Needs Answers in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 years, 1 month ago
Ok, guys. I really wanted to try this, and I think (hope) I will learn a lot of stuff from this. I hope you guys will help me by honestly critiquing this. What is here is my prologue and almost all of chapter 1. My writing is basically the same all the way through style wise, at least.
What I mostly want to know is:
1) Do I give enough…[Read more]
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 1 month ago
@skredder Okay, I’ve got to go now. I don’t know if you’re still here, but if you are, happy writing! I got a lot done, so I’m very happy.
Goodbye!
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 1 month ago
@ingridrd Whoops! I missed you. 🙁 Have fun! I have a question that you can answer sometime whenever you get the chance: Is this a particular version of Cinderella you’re doing? Or did someone you know write the script specifically for this performance?
@skredder Yes, I know. 😉 I really can’t complain, because I did the same thing to some…[Read more]
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 1 month ago
@skredder Ah, not good. I don’t like strong winds. 🙁
It would be awesome, but it’s just not going to happen. 😀 I’m now editing – no, rewriting – a section of my book after @seekjustice and @valtmy tore it apart. 😛 It’s actually going pretty well, but I wish I had written it correctly the first time!
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 1 month ago
@skredder Haha! I’ve been going around the house singing “It’s a Lovely Day Today” all day. 😀 Spring finally decided to show up with 70 degree weather (after it snowed just three days ago!) and everything is bright and cheery.
Is today special for any particular reason, or did you just mean that it’s special because you decided to keep wr…[Read more]
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 1 month ago
@skredder Oh hi! I thought you’d left. 🙂 Glad you’re still here! How’s it going?
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