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@godlyfantasy12

And I say it once again. I love how the Grim/Nyx/twins RP is going. It is so much fun to read!

@godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76 @koshka

And warning: my pen wandered away into the days of iron. Which means… Well, you’ll hear the change.

Also! I’m using this RP to test their dialogue. Alwin is using the less formal “thee” and “thou” because of his very less formal upbringing. I think he may do this in the book, although he mostly drops it…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

Actually, I do!!

So, I don’t know who they’d meet or anything, but I’ll do an RP for William and Alwin.

@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon  @godlyfantasy12

This is a little difficult to write, as the twins actually are wolves.

The Twins

Zlatan stood frozen to the wall, his eyes thinning to liquid gold slits.

Vulkasin clamped his mouth shut. How long had he been staring with it hanging like that? Ever since Grimm had done…well, whatever that wa…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

Wow. I never really noticed that. I mean, I sort of saw the similarities but I’ve also barely written her, so all I have is her voice, if that makes sense.

Okay. Zlatan will probably be totally weirded out, while Vulkasin’s gonna be like “THIS IS SO COOL!”

@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon  @godlyfantasy12

Annia

Now that there was no more…no more…blood, she could come bounding over with as much energy as usual.

The fairy had been crying, her nose and cheeks all pink and rosey.

Oh, wait. She hadn’t introduced herself yet. She waved to the others.

“My name’s Annia Winston. Good to meet…[Read more]

@koshka @godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76

All right!

Reúven

The boy was lost. Reúven understood that: he had been too. Many, many times.

He held the door open, waiting to go, to look, to find. Because he was Reúven Elroi, and he would find. Just a moment for November to adjust to the light again.

“Do you two…ah, know your way around here?…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

Alrighty then! Yeah no, they weren’t.

@elishavet-pidyon  @godlyfantasy12

Cécile

The poor fellow had been whipped again, and again. Angry red welts and abrasions crisscrossed in haphazard fashion. And this hasn’t been the first time, telling from the old scars these new ones covered.

She let out a few Algermain expressions l…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

So um, how have Dawson’s wip wounds been treated? Cause that might influence her response.

@freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12

Y’all…XD I think I like Joshua

@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon  @godlyfantasy12

Annia

She slowly tore her eyes away from the fairy and settled them on the two newcomers everyone else had been looking for.

Tall, in kinda funny clothing. One over five and a half feet, the other closer to six and a half. She smiled and cocked her head, lightly bouncing on her toes.

The…[Read more]

I don’t think I have any antagonists that are clearly defined enough to add. I mean, ya kinda have to know who they are.

Anyone else?

@godlyfantasy12

I was wondering!

@freedomwriter76 godlyfantasy

Sounds great to me! Reúven likes little girls, and Viktor would love to meet them both again.

@freedomwriter76

Dawson, no!!

And he had better be careful, or he’ll get a military nurse called down on him.

Btw, Cécile was a fully trained nurse, on her way to becoming a midwife actually, when the war flared up again, and she got called into the reserves.

@theloonyone

Oh, it’s fine, but thank you for redoing it!

Your WIP premise is so creative! And I totally get the “my book is running away from me” feeling! XD it’s happening to me currently.

Although, I do have one story that took a very romantic turn like that. Although, I don’t know if it’s exactly a “romance” because although that part is a…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon  @godlyfantasy12

Cécile

Heavy footsteps echoed down to them, tensing the air. Someone was coming.

She placed a hand on Annia’s shoulder,  perhaps gripping a bit tighter than nesesary. The girl’s infront of them looked tense and ready to fight. Cécile bit her lip.

Two men walked around the corner, both dre…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon  @godlyfantasy12

Zlatan

“Well! Now that that’s settled, which, by the way took forever, you guys are really bad at communication, could we get going? I, for one, would very much like to find Lynnie. Would one of you like to guide us, or shall I? How bout you canine?”

Canine? First Wolfboy, now a word neithe…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12 @koshka @godlyfantasy12

Viktor

Something wasn’t right; this was no pleasant coincidence. Viktor’s mind spun as he took in November’s shaken state.

It wasn’t something on the outside, something tangible. It was something else.

Thoughts.

Forebodings.

Memories.

“That…ah…that would be nice. Better then traveling alone, I suppo…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon  @godlyfantasy12

Aannnndd I deleted my RP. Again.

*Dramatic sigh*

Cécile 

She walked at a brisk step, heeled boots clicking in an even rhythm.

This place was nice. Comfortably clean, full of fresh un-sterilized air, with no messy situations to clean up. And none of the incessant rocking of the hospital sh…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

Do you want to introduce your characters, or me to go ahead?