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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 3 weeks ago
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Koshka replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 month, 3 weeks ago
It’s beautiful! I love the almost Ireland fairytale, almost medieval Europe feel. Lovely.
(Also, I hit you with some snowballs, so you could share some more scenes from Golden Song. In case you were wondering. XP)
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Koshka replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month, 3 weeks ago
Ah. Such fun. I love the kid’s reactions. XD
Leon laughed, a knowing expression on his face.
So…what is a knowing expression? Raised eyebrows? A smirk? This is such a vague description that his face won’t settle into one expression. It’s just a blur.
This is random, but I’ve noticed that your characters pray in turns. Is…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 month, 3 weeks ago
Here’s an aesthetic for Project Golden Songs, my new WIP. (It’s the one with the shepherd Aiche) (boy don’t I have a thing for shepherds. XD) I’m not dumping my other two, just trying to get this written.
Meet Elline, daughter of kings. She’s had a rough time of it, but she’s made of sterner stuff than most think.
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 3 weeks ago
*Cackles* *Grins*
I love it. Quincy seems good at activating ProtectMode in people. I need to tie that into the book.
Alrighty then.
Leo
The row of hedges ended in another lane. Leo turned up it for a few feet before darting around a large glass greenhouse with a gasped out prayer. He sent a glance over his shoulder.
Rory…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 3 weeks ago
Gotcha. We’re either going to an apartment flat, or their ship the Mantis, you pick.
Silvia
Number sequences flashed across her tablet. She stifled a groan. They had a tail.
A drop of sheer terror made her dizzy with the images, the sounds parading through her head. Pounding feet. Sharp metal. Blood.
She sucked in a deep…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 3 weeks ago
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Koshka replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 3 weeks ago
Then maybe it’s a good plan.
Well, the object doesn’t need to be heavy. It needs to leave a convincing imprint on the scene. This the fabric filled sack.
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Koshka replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 3 weeks ago
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Koshka replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 month, 3 weeks ago
Wow. He’s awesome. And delicate in a quiet strength kind of way. I keep coming back just to stare at his wings.
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Koshka replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 3 weeks ago
Agreed. Problem is, my hands are too full of snowballs at the moment to build myself one, so-
*dives into Elishavet’s snow fort*
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 3 weeks ago
Everyone needs a snow fort.
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 3 weeks ago
*erupts from snow fort*
Aha! Today I flingeth snoweth at thee!
@loopylin smack ×2
@liberty smack ×2
@freed_and_redeemed sma- nevermind. You have mercy for a day.
*pets chilly arsenal*
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Koshka replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 month, 3 weeks ago
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Koshka replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 3 weeks ago
This is not something I would enjoy doing, but it’s a thing. So here.
1) Get some boots a couple sizes too big, a large overcoat, a pair of gloves, and some blood from a butcher (or kill a dozen or so pigeons).
2) Fill a burlap sack with a bed sheet, linens, ect. Set up the parlor with your typewriter facing a window as if you were…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 3 weeks ago
Ack! Sputter, GASP.
Fine. I’ll just have to use words from my actual WIP.
A voice broke the peace of the mountain side. “Wonder if they’ll take us this year.”
Zlati whipped around, concentration thoroughly shattered. Flopped a few paces away, Vulka lay in the sparse grass with a grin firmly in place. He rolled over onto…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 3 weeks ago
Um, what?!
Lol.
Idk… Maybe use my shoes, extra clothes, sawdust, and some of those heavy chains to make it look like I sank into the “bubbly creek” assuming the factories dump into the river so most likely create one. It’s risky, but the first thing that came to mind. XD
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 3 weeks ago
*Suspenseful music plays*
Leo
Great blue stars. Leo’s teeth clenched. A tail, here, halfway home. These creeps really hard no discretion. “Good man. On Zero.”
Three.
He tapped his com unt to alert Silvia.
Two.
Silvia even with them under the pretense of taking Quincy. Her eyes were sharp, fingers twitching over her…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 3 weeks ago
Here goes.
“Good morning, luv.” Aiche looked up from his fire, a smile in his eyes. His hood was off and his black curls tumbled cheerfully over his forehead. He looked younger than he probably was, and yet-
She settled down beside him. There was a wonderful smell in the air.
“Apples?”
“Our tree is over there. Eat, then I’ll show you.”
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 3 weeks ago
Smack!
Yay! I’ve been creamed. Now I have eight snowballs….
*grins a disoriented grin*
*falls back into snow fort*
Let’s see what I can do.
Also, adorable scene! I like how you showed what Leon was thinking almost exclusively by his actions. It really made me feel like I knew him.
@ellette-giselle I’m glad you like h…[Read more]
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