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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 11 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @godlyfantasy12
Eira
The story, I’d heard the like all her life. One child came in with a broken heart and left with a pain killer. What I hadn’t expected was the end. So I sit in mute silence as the impact of what was said flows over me.
The door flies open, shattering the peace of the room like glass. I…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 11 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 @koshka @freedomwriter76 @keilah-h @wilder-w
Yuck! Frida is a slimeball.
Winton
He hadn’t wished to have this well of an introduction to the kid’s aches, but then again, perhaps that wasn’t quite right.
He shook Joshua’s hand as the boys got ready to leave.
“Goodbye Dr. Winton. Thank you for doing this.” Joshua sighed and…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 11 months ago
Awwwww, Paxton and Nyx….
*Wipes eyes*
*Takes a breath*
*Squishes them both in a group hug*
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 11 months ago
That’s why Liora called him “Cadet Elroi”. 😉 XD
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 11 months ago
Reúven is in…. (*Does some research and decides to just take CAP and the National Gaurd and Army Reserves and blend them*) the National Civil Patrol. This is a lot like actual military service, bu it is really just a program for giving youth a taste of the military and building worthy citizens. (includes training and disaster…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 11 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 @koshka @freedomwriter76 @keilah-h @wilder-w
Wow, Arthur is such a mess. XD
Winton
Almost all the comfort in the air had disappeared the moment the raven haired girl stepped in. Her face was flaming in embarrassment and she was obviously with the friendly young man who’s stepped in before her, yet a form of darkness beyond her…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 11 months ago
Almarrin
Her…father? Rhaich! Teeth came together and grey eyes flashed, but he finished the sling with an even gentler hand.
Then he found a Janitor’s closet nearby and cleaned up the tile. The lass on the other hand–she was still huddled against the wall, eyes round in her white face, shivering. He frowned and pulled his jacket…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 11 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 @koshka @freedomwriter76 @keilah-h @wilder-w
I am now!
I really like the idea of RPs at home. In fact, I’ve had one brewing for Reúven all through the weekend.
Winton
A careful look around showed that everyone had finished eating. Winton stood and clapped his hands.
“All right! Who’s ready for something more active?” A mixed…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 11 months ago
Almarrin
A scream, distant yet clear, broke through their conversation. A young female, calling someone’s name in a voice that sent prickles up his neck. It was cut short. Almarrin glanced at Inglor’s startled face, then ran, footsteps echoing down the hall.
Which way? There were dozens of halls, and hundreds if not thousands of…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 11 months ago
Hope!!!! *Weeps*
Okay, I have a character that can help! Almarrin’s sort of spying around campus right now, so he’s more than available.
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic So…my draft has finally started…and I'd like some thoughts so far! 😀 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 11 months ago
I’m sorry this is late, but those were really good!
I just read through to chapter seven. As soon as they got frog marched onto the truck I started to cry. Especially since I suspected they were headed for a death camp. Those last few chapters hurt so much.
(Keep up the good work!)
I am excited to meet them! (YOSEF!!!)
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 11 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @godlyfantasy12
Squishy!!!!!!!
Eira
To my utter relief the prayer was short, but still the words rankled my mind. She called Him the God who sees. As if this God so many people believed in cared a jot about us. As if he even listened.
Maybe He is real, I don’t know, but if he is, he obviously doesn’t think…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 11 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 @koshka @freedomwriter76 @keilah-h @wilder-w
By the way, so you know, I think this is the schedule of the meeting:
Food (Winton does some Would you rather games while everyone is wrapping up [it’s a good icebreaker and he gets to know the kids better.])
A game (something a little active but not exactly, like hot potato or giant…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic So…my draft has finally started…and I'd like some thoughts so far! 😀 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 11 months ago
YES. The worst thing we could do would be to forget. I agree that it does need written about, and I am certainly still waiting for more. Just…*sigh*
Mwahaha… character conflict.
Ooo! I can’t wait!
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Koshka replied to the topic So…my draft has finally started…and I'd like some thoughts so far! 😀 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 11 months ago
…and now we enter the reason I don’t typically study WWII.
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 11 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 @koshka @freedomwriter76 @keilah-h @wilder-w
(I think I’m going to have to do a whole post outlining different traditions of Eirtan, because they keep on growing!)
Winton
“Liora! Come on in. You too, Viktor, we’re so glad to have you.
The two young people sat down quietly as Winton turned to the whole group.
“I think it’s…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 11 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 @koshka @freedomwriter76 @keilah-h @wilder-w
AND I DIDN’T FINISH IT!!! Okay, just a moment. *Frantic typing*
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 11 months ago
if it makes u feel any better….we’re really looking forward to it??
That does help. XD
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 11 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 @koshka @freedomwriter76 @keilah-h @wilder-w
By the way, I’ve figured out that Reúven has a hardship license (because of his father’s paraplegia). Also, because his and Liora’s families know each other so well, him giving her a ride is nothing uncommon.
ALSO!!! I kinda feel the need to explain what sounds rather funny in our…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 11 months ago
*gasp*
I’m an eccentric mentor!?
*Starts to throw confetti*
Waaiiittttt….
*Lowers confetti*
What exactly does that mean?
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