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Jaybird replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
I love your characters! They are so wonderful!
As for Reúven?
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BWAHAHA! I just had to do that, sorry. XD but the answer is that I don’t know. He… He goes through a lot…
Do you remember the two characters I mentioned on the spoiler forum? Do you also remember that…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
Ooooohhh, Paxton!!!!
@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon
Vulkasin
His brother sucked in another ragged breath and smiled slightly. Or rather the corners of his mouth turned up, hardly touching his eyes. “I’ll be fine. It’s good to see you, Nyx.”
Vulkasin almost wrapped an arm around his brother’s shoulders, but instead rested…[Read more]
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Jaybird replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76 @koshka
Okie dokie.
Reúven
Big blue eyes stared at them from under a mop of ginger hair. Then they focused in on Viktor.
“V-Viktor?”
This boy knew his brother?
“November!” Viktor’s face lit up. “Peace to you, brother. I’m so glad to see you again.”
The red head’s eyes widened a little more and he blin…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
I love them! Although they do need to get themselves straightened out, but that’s just character flaws, right? XD
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
*Gasp*
The stars…I just read over those character sketches and…and…for some reason I didn’t realize they’d be wearing the stars of David.
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
AGH! That’s wonderful and awful and terrible at the same time. Poor November though. He already has so much trauma. They all do.
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
They’re actually about 17 years old, but they look older. =)
The twins
A young man stood in the center of the corridor a very ready position, dark blue eyes glaring at them. Zlatan stepped even with his brother, hand on hilt.
“Vulkasin? Zlatan?” A voice exploded inside his head, snapping his stare down to a strange looking…[Read more]
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Jaybird replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
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Jaybird replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
And I’ll try to get longer replies in. These have been rather too short.
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
Oops sorry… I was referring to the twins’ eye colors. Vulkasin’s flower petal yellow, Zlatan warm gold.
I know! This time I just hit the wrong button. *Sigh*
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Jaybird replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @koshka @godlyfantasy12
Ok, let’s go!
Viktor
Tall walls loomed above them, trapping them into a place that smelled too much like horses and people. Viktor scrunched his nose and cut a glance at the boy beside him.
Reúven relaxed against the wall, his arms crossed in a manner that was both comfortable, and that allowed him to…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
(Ugh, I accidentally deleted my response.)
Yes, I remember! She’s another of those people on my To Be Despised list.
The Twins
Faint flickers of light whispered of torches. The stairs grew steeper untill they suddenly stopped. But not before a sound from below froze the two a few steps from the bottom.
Bright yellow eyes met…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
Yes, That’s perfectly fine! In all honesty it’ll probably help.
I think their a little disoriented right now, and Vulkasin’s like “Hey, where do you think this goes?”
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
Well, it’s a bit complicated. Basically he refused to complete some pretty horrible orders, and by the time he got caught he had started undoing much of his commanding officer’s work.
As to who had it done, GO BEAT HIM UP FOR ME IF YOU PLEASE. His name is Yarvoj. He was Zlatan’s Sotnik.
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
Of course Paxton can wear that! He’d be really cute…
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @godlyfantasy12
So, a quick run down of what’s changed:
This is right after Zlatan’s Solution beat, so he’s a bit emaciated and weak, and has wounds from his beating which are still healing. He’s wearing no armor besides his sword, in an effort to reduce the pain. He’s struggling a bit with redemption right…[Read more]
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Jaybird replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
Ach, I know! But I’m really glad it makes you feel that way.
You do. 😉
Haha! Seriously though, I like the earlier medieval fashions for a reason! XD
William’s “hose” is the same thing.
Awwwwwww, I can totally imagine him like that and it’s soooo cute!
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