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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 months ago
That works! Just swap wife and son for parents.
The one thing I’m going to criticize is what Charles says when his son is saved:Â
Okay, I will see what I can do about that. Though I may put this one off for a bit. Thank you for pointing this out. I’m not the most emotional person, so sometimes I struggle with writing em…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 months, 1 week ago
@ellette-giselle @stephie @keilah-h @theducktator @loopylin @theshadow
Next chapter people!
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 months, 2 weeks ago
@ellette-giselle @stephie @keilah-h @theducktator @loopylin @theshadow
Who’s ready for the next scene?
Chapter the 22nd – The Murderer
I need to read Little House on the Prairie again.
The is one character in this chapter that I’m wondering if I’ve gone too far with him. Does it make sense why he does what he does in this chapter? (This…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 months, 2 weeks ago
I completely agree, although I’d like to ask how old they both are. Because Alan seems to have a lot of backstory for somebody who could be about Martha’s age.
Martha is the older of the two, by about a year. She is supposed to be eighteen while Alan is still seventeen. I know, I know, if she was two years younger, then they could sin…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 months, 2 weeks ago
@stephie yep my parents are six years apart.
Typically I use ten years as my limit for age gaps between couples.
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 months, 3 weeks ago
I usually get together with my cousins on Thanksgiving and have takeout Chinese food.Â
Actually, that’s what I sort of had for my Thanksgiving meal this year. Rice bowls.
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 months, 3 weeks ago
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 months, 3 weeks ago
(The puns are driving me mad tho. You seriously need to stop or I’m going to lose it. lol)
Unless that’s your goal……….. lol
Eric right now:
Hmm… I think you might be getting a break from bad puns right now.
*violently defenestrates Eric*
*looks up what ‘defenestrate’ means* Oh!
Maybe Eric is just h…
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The Ducktator replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 months, 3 weeks ago
*violently defenestrates Eric*
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 months, 3 weeks ago
I am choosing now to share that sometimes, while I read your book, I go to google something, thinking that I’ll find some fandom web page to answer my question, and then it hits me: there is no fandom yet. There is no Wikipedia page. XD
Yup, not there yet. Out of curiosity, what was your question(s)?
Also that’s too fun…
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 months, 3 weeks ago
@theducktator @ellette-giselle @stephie @keilah-h
Could you please take your whole conversation about crushes on fictional characters elsewhere? Thank you!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 months, 3 weeks ago
@stephie heh I’m the opposite. I can’t imagine what having a crush on a real person is like.
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 months, 3 weeks ago
@ellette-giselle @stephie @keilah-h @theducktator @loopylin @theshadow
Next chapter! We are about two-thirds through The Cost now. (Maybe a little under.) This scene was not in the first draft, so I’m interested to see what you think of it.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 months, 4 weeks ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 months ago
WHAT!!! STEPHIE!!! TRAITOR!!
We are still pushing for Stripe to get hugged, and it is going to happen.
Its a fact.
and I just gave Linus a rundown on facts.
😉
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 3 months ago
Here is some new artwork of Alan I’ve gradually been chipping away at when I have the chance over the last few weeks. I’ve been meaning to redo artwork of him with a more refined design for a while, I just have not been satisfied with most things I have drawn. Now I finally have something I’m happy with. I’m considering developing this further…[Read more]
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RAE replied to the topic Break the Record!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months ago
Let’s see…
@highscribeofaetherium @stephie @keilah-h @grcr @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @ellette-giselle @mineralizedwritings @theducktator @esther-c
Did I miss anyone?
- We need four more people to Break the Record
- Should we shoot for around 4 EST? That’s 3 o’clock Central, 2 o’clock Mountain, and 1 o’clock Pacific. we can push it to 5 EST,…
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The Ducktator replied to the topic Break the Record!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months ago
@rae YES! Tagging some people…
@whalekeeper @raxforge @esther-c @grcr @jonas @highscribeofaetherium @stephie @theshadow @linus-smallprint @keilah-h @ellette-giselle @savannah_grace2009 @koshka @beth-torres @loopylin @theloonyone @mineralizedwritings @princesachronicle22 @thearcaneaxiom @kyronthearcanin @elishavet-pidyon @allthekeepers
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 months ago
@ellette-giselle @theducktator @keilah-h @stephie @theshadow @loopylin
I was hoping to get this to you earlier, but I was having trouble writing the dialogue in this chapter for whatever reason. I’m still not quite happy with the first part or my title for this chapter, but let’s see what you all think.
Hopefully Chapter the 20th – The…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 months ago
Yay!!! I think it fulfills two needs for us the readers if Stripe gets hugged. 1.) It’s super funny to see tough protective characters get hugged. 2.) I don’t know about anyone else, but I’m about ready to risk the claws to give him a hug myself. He needs it.
(Plus, he looks super soft and fluffy) 😛
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