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@ellette-giselle

I don’t see either, to be honest XD

I see myself in her. I love her personality and…idk, I just want to give her a hug, the poor girl 😭💔💗💗

@ellette-giselle

I love these scenes! You’re very talented, and I can see you have a passion for sharing Jesus through your writing! Keep it up!

Sabina is my favorite! 💗 (I also love her name)

@everyone

Okay.

For those of you sad and mad about Cass….

I have some spoilers.

So if you hate spoilers, LOOK AWAY

I’ve been brainstorming a lot about Cass’s character, and I have come to a decision.

Cass is a perfect example of how even strong Christians give up, how someone who appears to be a superchristian can fall and crumble under…[Read more]

@theducktator

I feel like I should have some long drawn out post since one of my first for real novels was dystopian, but it seriously needs a lot of work, so I only have one short piece of advice for you. 😉

Don’t limit your scope. A lot of times dystopia takes place in a world/country similar to America, right? Don’t tie yourself down to tha…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle
Yep! Sorry, my post was a little late, lol

@ellette-giselle

Oooh, he looks so cool!!

Ugh I posted something long and it didn’t work XD

Min has way more experience with dystopia, so listen to her. But I’m working on a dreampunk/fantasy dystopia, so I have a feeling for the genre.

Dystopias are all about taking a philosophy or point of worry in the modern day, and running with it as far as you can in a hypothetical scenario. It’s…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

No that’s not overwhelming me!!! <3

Actually that makes a lot of sense.

I have to think about that XD XD (and pray about it too!) because that would work really well!!!

Aww thanks for asking!

If you look at the Prayer Requests topic I posted about how I’m doing (sorry I’m tired and don’t feel like retyping all that lol)

But…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Hey girl! I love how consistently you’re working on this! Here’s a small critique which you don’t need to read right now if it will potentially overwhelm you ❤️

You’re so selfish…you’re a horrible friend, why do you think she’d ever want you, little Payne?

You shouldn’t even be alive.

…

Don’t tell anyone…they…

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@mineralizedwritings

Farimiiiiiiirrrrrr

@rae

Poor Nahim. Imagine being a tomato…ugh.😂 I don’t like tomatoes. What do you usually eat for breakfast?

@theducktator

Oh my goodness your signature lol that’s great

YES THEY ARE

Eloy’s elite

hahaha yeah

@savannah_grace2009

Sef and Lilitu are adorable, dandelions are beautiful, and Eloy is way better than Cassian. AND YOU INCLUDED THE TOAD. OH MY GOODNESS!!!!!! I’M SO HAPPY!!!!!!

@theducktator

This one’s for you.

@anyone-else I know this scene isn’t my best, but I’m super tired and brain-dead…and I just felt like writing something XD

Chapter 15

Sef held Hanna tight to her chest.

Please be quiet, she silently pleaded, rocking back and forth.

A waft of the rancid odor escaped through the secret door overhead, and Sef…[Read more]

@theshadow

<333

I’m glad you liked it!

@theshadow

Thanks for reading it!!!!!!! <3

Idk if I’d call it a resistance, but all I can say is that light always prevails over darkness!!!!!!!!!