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whaley replied to the topic The Baron Chronicles in the forum Short Story Critiques 4 months, 2 weeks ago
That looks really good!! It looks like a real cover I might find, maybe in the graphic novel section of the library. The gold lettering contrasts nicely with the cool colors. I’ve mentioned before that the lighting in that piece is great.
This is unrelated to the art, but I just realized I didn’t help much with Baron Chronicles even though…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 2 weeks ago
Also, props to Gabriel for being a responsible guy and making the hatchet a cover. I appreciate his efforts.
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whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 2 weeks ago
Lucille
Lucy fell into a doze. When she sometimes opened her eyes, a dream haze took over, and the wallpaper flickered, the flowers blooming against each other and cascading down the paper. Fuzzy orange light stained her vision. Her mind retreated into her body and she couldn’t bring herself to stir.
The labyrinth had been such a strange w…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic WARS in the forum Plotting 4 months, 3 weeks ago
Yes of course! I’ll compile some ideas and get back to you later this week!
(Mayyyyy or may not have forgotten about this 🫣😂)
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whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 3 weeks ago
Time can pass while she’s in bed and Gabriel can do whatever he wants
Lucille
The warm mattress and sheets felt familiar and alien at once, after so much walking and uncertainty. Lucy rolled over a few times and held her face into her arms. The soft warmth held her above and pushed her adrift, so everything left her be.
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whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 3 weeks ago
HA. Thank you.
I suppose she’s literally in limbo until you choose to pull her out or the end of the world arrives.
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whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 3 weeks ago
That reminds me, deaths never happen in these roleplays but they shouldn’t be so taboo. As long as it works, it’s just an AU.
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whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 3 weeks ago
Lucille
Lucy rubbed her knuckles into her eyes and then against the wall, unable to push the haze out of her head. This wasn’t the time to be tired. They had to get out, they had to keep walking.
She tried to voice her frustrations, but her words turned into a high-pitched groan. She took a step and stumbled into Gabriel’s arms where he knelt.
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whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 3 weeks ago
Well you certainly scared me. My little sis will freak when I read that part out loud.
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whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 3 weeks ago
The girl’s wide eyes dulled from silver to gray, and a final puff of air escaped her stone lips.
WAITWHATNO FELICITY
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whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 3 weeks ago
That second to last paragraph was really good, I like the way you wrote it.
Lucille
Lucy dropped the hatchet on the floor and walked several paces, realizing that it wouldn’t be too good to fall on it. A kid in the east fields had fallen on his father’s ax two years ago and there had been many cautionary stories before that.
She slid to…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 3 weeks ago
I also have some good ideas basing off Whaley’s poem.
Be my guest! I just riffed on what I remembered of the characters lol
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whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 3 weeks ago
Violent of the “kill everything” type.
XD Oh Gabriel, you force of nature
Lucille
Lucy peered out the window at the crows. “They’re real handsome birds when they’re not so close up.”
She eyed the room’s mantelpiece noticing a handle sticking from the ornate wood. It was a small silver hatchet. Without hesitation, she yanked it free of it…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 3 weeks ago
Can you guys describe your characters?
Oh! Yeah I can do that. Barnes is just a tall woman with chopped blonde hair. Wears very old-style clothing from maybe the 40s, a suit in this. Also a white mask with dark eyeholes. Little Lucy is literally the same but without the mask and with even shorter hair.
It’s cool you want to draw this! B…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 3 weeks ago
I’m good with anything that happens as long as Lucy stays with Gabriel. She’d be none too happy if they got separated
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whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 3 weeks ago
5 is Ayla, Ducktator’s character
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whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 3 weeks ago
You can always make them lose their way and come back to them another time. The mist could warp time and they’d wander around without doing anything significant for days on end. So you can do something else in the meantime.
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whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 3 weeks ago
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whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 3 weeks ago
The way I’ve imagined it, the labyrinth is really good at acting like it has a mastermind. It’s not a person and doesn’t have a person behind it, but it can mechanically detect, reflect and manipulate real people’s thoughts. No one within the story wrote the poem; it just spontaneously manifested because of how the labyrinth…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 3 weeks ago
Lucille
Lucy did as she was told and more; she slid every candle into her trouser belt and pockets. The flames flickered around her waist like a burner under a pan and she hissed with restrained laughter.
The poem didn’t make much sense. Was it about people who had already escaped? Had they died? She recognized Gabriel’s title, but the res…[Read more]
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