Stepheroni and Cheese

@keilah-h @rae @theshadow @princesachronicle22 @kyronthearcanin

Natalie 

This was a couples thing? There had to be a mistake. Natalie looked at Bob. His look of horror mirrored the look she felt etched on to her face.

“Her Majesty is the last duck I would ever date,” said Bob firmly.

Surely she wasn’t that bad. Natalie glared at him. “You’r…[Read more]

I don’t want to hurt anyone’s feelings. But I didn’t want to ignore what was said. I felt it was better to point out, instead of ignoring it. I’ve had conversations with multiple people from different backgrounds, and we tend to leave with more perspective than when we came. That was part of my intention, but I guess many people don’t have the…

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Yeah I don’t want to talk about this anymore, Ellette clearly doesn’t want to discuss it 😅

it’s Ellette’s story, and she can do whatever she wants

I agree. LTBL is fine, the marriage bit is just a part of it anyway.

I think what I’m trying to ask, is what don’t you agree with in what we’ve said and why don’t you believe it? I’m not trying to be…

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@ellette-giselle

You don’t have to answer anything I said…we can be done lol

I swear I wasn’t trying to argue…

Sara just gets confused and carried away sometimes so I’m sorry :/

@keilah-h

Yeah, I know.

That’s why I think we’re kind of done XD XD I did NOT mean for this to get blown up like this…

@ellette-giselle @keilah-h

WHOA WHOA WHOA I DID NOT MEAN TO START A FIGHT.

Yeah that’s what I’m feeling too…XD I feel like actually horrible :/

but it’s Ellette’s story, and she can do whatever she wants.

I second that.

I wasn’t attacking your story or telling you you should change it…I just wanted to discuss this  a little bit because I love…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

I’m not in any way trying to get you to believe how I believe! You don’t have to accept anything we’re saying…and I’m sorry if I made you feel that way. I think me and Whaley just like talking about stuff like this and we just saw this as an interesting topic to discuss.

It’s okay if you want to end it and I’m not going to…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Whether or not the marriage lasts, it’s important to have a healthy relationship with your partner. If the marriage lasts but it is a bad relationship, I would say it was a bad decision to get married.

Yes! I feel the same way!

It is possible to have a healthy marriage at a young age. You can do it. It is just hard to have a good o…

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@ellette-giselle

well I’ve read a TON of books about Christian marriages and Biblical courtship/dating and I have never read that! Plus, I have witnessed a TON of beautiful marriages that started very young and have gone on for years!

Okay. I’m sorry if I’ve offended you! I’m just telling you my perspective.

I’m not saying that ALL young m…[Read more]

I’m sorry for barging in like this. But relationships can literally die over this.

@savannah_grace2009 @ellette-giselle

I’m not here for critique. I’m just here bc this is an interesting discussion, and I know a friend of a friend who’s getting married soon so it’s on my mind.

Whether or not the marriage lasts, it’s important to have a healthy relationship with your partner. If the marriage lasts but it is a bad relations…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

I’ll do a character after Min. 🙂

@ellette-giselle

Okay okay okay

Nevermind

XD

That’s just my personal opinion lol. I’m not saying you should do that, I was just saying how I feel. I don’t know…I just really really hate the idea of people getting married young, and I’m not sure why. So you do what you want with your story! See, this is why I need to stop looking at your book…[Read more]

@mineralizedwritings

Oh my goodness, that looks so good!!!

Psstt, @freed_and_redeemed … 👆

@rae

I would if I could! But life is pretty busy right now and since sci-fi’s not my genre, I don’t really feel qualified to give good feedback. 😅

@rae

If your friend’s dad doesn’t, we have a rawhide hat with real rattlesnake skin band and I think an eagles feather in our house, plus a real civil war era sword! Give him some glasses and we have Mundy plus sword!!!!!! Double cool!

Hehe I doubt he would wear something like that, he’s a very solemn man. Which makes the mental image funnier &#x…[Read more]

I know I said I was going to leave, but I’m just bored lol!

also, one little issue I have: maybe wait till Sabina’s at least 18? I’m 17 and I wouldn’t marry a guy now even if I knew him very well. My mom got married at 17 but I was under the impression she was the exception.

I agree with Keilah.

I know your story is set in medieval times, so th…[Read more]

@rae

Sounds good with me, thanks for letting me run my mouth off lol