Stepheroni and Cheese

@the_lost-journal

Lollll😂

Two strangers decide to go to couples counseling and see how long it takes the counselor to realize they don’t even know each other.

@savannah_grace2009

Okay, well, I am reading! *Shoves all the motivation your way* I will give you some comments and some in-depth thoughts! Hopefully these are what you’re looking for.

Comments (as I’m going through) –

– Characters are very easy to picture, and not very easy to forget. XD So you’re good in that area.

– Prose flows smoothly…[Read more]

@keilah-h

It’s in the update on her profile. 🙃

You know you’re a writer when you come back from camp thinking about all the people you met and what parts of them are going in a book. I can finally picture one of my character’s hair now!

@keilah-h

yes, actually!!!!!

I think I have a couple more chapters since you last read it!!!

@keilah-h

aw yesss

@ellette-giselle

The writerly urge to use random British expressions. XD

@keilah-h

I feel like I always write the most when I post on KP or when I know people will read it…

It’s so cool to see writers supporting other writers <3

@whalekeeper

Heeyy Sara, I’m about a third through your story right now! What kind of critique do you want? Any specific concerns, stuff like that?

Ummmm

Let me think lol

I think I’m just worried about pacing, flow of the story, and if it’s at all interesting lol

And character development ideas would be helpful too!!

I also just want to know t…[Read more]

LILITU’S NICKNAME IS TULIPS???????

Yeah lol

you can thank one of the boys from my school for that one XDXD

The frog wedding is adorable.

I KNOWWWW

YOU KILLED NEVEAH?!?!?!

no comment….

@theducktator

 I just finished your prologue. It’s good, but you overuse italics.

NOOOOOO
IT IS IMPOSSIBLE TO USE ITALICS

😱😱😱😱

*sobs hysterically*

Oh my goodness, they kissed!!!!

yesssss

*coughs* um yeah…chapter three is kinda dark I guess 😂😂

@keilah-h

Hmm, I will remember to choose a fork for a weapon next time someone throws me into a tournament.

@koshka

All people are weird in their own way, some more dramatically than others. It’s the “normal” ones that usually scare me.

Those are the kinds of people who are average and forgettable enough to be spies, you see.

@loopylin

Why thank you. Glad to be your local online conundrum ✨

<3

@ellette-giselle

Loopy never seemed weird to me.

Oh she’s…[Read more]

Except @loopylin

She’s an absolute weirdo, don’t know what to make of her

@koshka @ellette-giselle @keilah-h

I was plopped into this world with many weird friends – a pyrotechnician and a chronic tea drinker among them – so the people on here are pretty normal in my eyes.

@keilah-h I mean, that’s what I had assumed. So your thoughts aren’t too crazy. Unless I’m crazy, of course.

@theducktator

But why though.

Becuuuuuzzzzz Eric isn’t a worse guy than Edmund or Eustace were. He’s cowardly, but he cares about his sister. So there. Humph.

@the_lost-journal

I think we just have different definitions of sacraments.

@thearcaneaxiom

*Steals your questions*

What do you think is the very most important element to the Christian identity? In other words, what tells you whether someone is a true Christian or not?

I would say you can tell if someone is a true Christian by whether they…[Read more]

@the_lost-journal

The new one.