@stephie
Active 8 months, 2 weeks ago- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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Enid replied to the topic Middle-grade fiction ideas needed!!! in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 1 year, 5 months ago
– What did/do you enjoy about your favorite MG novels?
Mm, probably the general sense of wholesomeness. The stories weren’t deep by YA standards, as YA tends to be emotional and brooding. But the MG novels I enjoyed had, rather, a sense of appreciation for the good things in a kid’s life. And even if bad things were happening to the p…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Middle-grade fiction ideas needed!!! in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 1 year, 5 months ago
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Esther replied to the topic Middle-grade fiction ideas needed!!! in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 1 year, 5 months ago
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Esther started the topic Middle-grade fiction ideas needed!!! in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 1 year, 5 months ago
Hey guys!!
So as I step away from one project for a while to let it simmer before I tackle the third draft, I need another longer length project to work on. I thought about starting on an idea that’s been rolling around in my head for a couple months, but I’ll need to do a lot of research and don’t feel like doing that yet, lol.
So! I’ve been wa…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Contemporary writing in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
I am so so so sorry for not getting back to you sooner!! this got buried under a bunch of other things I had to take care of. But I’m back!
So far, for the first one I want it to be set in the summer or fall, and be about two high schoolers sending paper airplanes to each other from really far away and the two’s relationship and how…
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Esther replied to the topic Worth All the World in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 5 months ago
Hallie NO. I spent that whole scene with that sinking feeling that a character was about to do something stupid and she did. *sigh*
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My dad is only 5’8” and he’s still 10 times the man that your Patrick is, Hallie. *glares*
Lemme just say, if there’s ever a sequel, Patrick’s coming back…
And you’ll prolly see what I mean by…[Read more]
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Enid replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy – Book II: The Sword in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 5 months ago
I don’t know. XD Maybe because I’m KP’s friendly neighborhood psychic.
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Enid replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
No other metroidvania will be able to compete except the og Hollow Knight
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Enid replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
SILKSONG!!!!!!!!!!!!! 🤡💀✨❤️
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Enid replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 5 months ago
Cute wrinkly noses. 🙃
I think Ellie is the right kind of person to have around when I’m cooking, loll. I make great food, but always leave the stove on.
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Enid replied to the topic Help on writing an impactful last day in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
Children (under 10 maybe?) usually know that death exists, but aren’t very afraid of it because they don’t understand.
I’d move that down to 7 or 8 – when it comes to not understanding death at all.
My 9-year-old sister has responded to death with some solid understanding of its impact. Last Sunday, she was being difficult about som…[Read more]
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
Celarent
Mateo didn’t even know what school was? Celarent sighed. “It’s where you learn stuff. If you want to get anywhere in life, you better figure that out.” He paused. “Oh, right. You aren’t going anywhere in life anyway.” Mateo ought to get expelled. Celarent hadn’t spent days forging paperwork just to attend class…[Read more]
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic Help on writing an impactful last day in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
I have a related question. I need help on several other character’s reactions to the fact that one will die, particularly her best friend and grandfather.
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic What are your most influential childhood books? in the forum Topic of the Week 1 year, 5 months ago
@elishavet-elroi
I love Grace Livingston Hill so much! My great grandmother had a beach house, and it was full of old romance novels. Her GLH books were what got me into romance.
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic What are your most influential childhood books? in the forum Topic of the Week 1 year, 5 months ago
I had several fanfics for the Boxcar Children when I was younger. The one actually had a coherent plot, which is more than I can say for most of my WIPs. XD
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic What are your most influential childhood books? in the forum Topic of the Week 1 year, 5 months ago
I have no idea. I read so many things as a child, and while I still love many of them, I’m not sure how much influence which ones have had on my writing. XD The Green Ember definitely influenced my first WIP though.
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic A Narrative of the Squirrels and the Ducks in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 5 months ago
Sorry I took so long to respond here. I saw this when I was sick and forgot to get back to it. Anyway, I enjoyed that and don’t really have feedback beyond what others have said.
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic Worth All the World in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 5 months ago
Hallie NO. I spent that whole scene with that sinking feeling that a character was about to do something stupid and she did. *sigh*
She felt petite next to him, although she had never been the tallest girl around at five feet four inches.
Antonio wasn’t that tall. Hallie guessed that he couldn’t be over five feet ten inches.
My dad is…[Read more]
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy – Book II: The Sword in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 5 months ago
*visible confusion*
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Esther replied to the topic Worth All the World in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 5 months ago
ahhhh, Cody’s “Tantono” sent such a warm feeling through my heart… that was so cute!! ❤️
Aww, yay! ☺️ That was a scene that wasn’t in the first draft, but when it came together, it made me smile inside. 🥰
Hallie… you know why. don’t give me that.
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Excuse me? In front of her father’s house?? Uhm, absolutely not! lol kidding kidding
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