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Stepheroni and Cheese replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 months, 2 weeks ago
I didn’t realize that Alan being forced to use magic was similar to the gorbs forcing Aaron and Oliver Wilson to become wizards until I was writing on this chapter. So I had to come up with a reason on the spot to explain why Oliver was helping Cyrus. Did his reasons for walking away from Alan make sense?
The way I looked at it w…[Read more]
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Stepheroni and Cheese replied to the topic Does anyone here write poetry or haiku's ? in the forum Poetry 4 months, 2 weeks ago
That’s beautiful!
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Stepheroni and Cheese replied to the topic The Quote Archive in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 2 weeks ago
“Do you want some lip gloss, buddy?”
-My sister, again
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Stepheroni and Cheese replied to the topic The Quote Archive in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 2 weeks ago
“IT LOOKS JUST LIKE A REAL PIG!”
-My sister
No context *laughs*
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Stepheroni and Cheese replied to the topic The Quote Archive in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 2 weeks ago
I won’t tell y’all exactly who said this, but Xmas day:
“My burps smell like cookies and I need something healthy”
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Stepheroni and Cheese replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 2 weeks ago
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Stepheroni and Cheese replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 months, 2 weeks ago
Hmmmm the challenge which all of us Christian writers face…writing good scenes where the characters pray.
I’m not going to pretend to be good at this.
However, I do have a couple things to point out. Firstly, I noticed that you like to write down the entire prayer in italics like the character’s thoughts. Now, this…[Read more]
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Stepheroni and Cheese replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 months, 2 weeks ago
Merry Christmas!
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Stepheroni and Cheese replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 months, 2 weeks ago
Come ON.
*ushers my little sister in to do her cute face*Â please don’t kill Charles?
Being a writer, I know you’ll probably kill him.I’m curious about the Australia story.
And yes. Italian food is AMAZING. My family has recipes that have been passed down for generations.
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Stepheroni and Cheese replied to the topic Writing Characters of the Opposite Gender in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 3 weeks ago
I mean for me it’s a very case-by-case thing. Like if a woman took an important mission with a bunch of men, knowing she’s the weak link, and potentially putting their lives at greater risk, then that’s wrong. Whereas if she’s the most capable in a scenario, yeah, I’m putting my trust in her and not in an inexperienced leader.…
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Stepheroni and Cheese replied to the topic Writing Characters of the Opposite Gender in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 3 weeks ago
@ellette-giselle @whalekeeper @keilah-h @whoever else was talking about this
I asked the question of what my family thought about women in combat around the dinner table tonight. There were a lot of things brought up that I hadn’t even thought of. Here are some of the insights from my parents:
- It’s not fair to the other side to have women on…
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Stepheroni and Cheese replied to the topic Writing Characters of the Opposite Gender in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 3 weeks ago
*tosses twelve year old me back into the past*
It did send me an email! Maybe I’ll just start doing that for fun so I hear the cool notification sound!
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Stepheroni and Cheese replied to the topic Writing Characters of the Opposite Gender in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 3 weeks ago
honestly I think something like that actually exactly what @stephie was going for. The guy either doesn’t know any better or is something of a coward, and the girl is forced to lead because of it.
Off topic: I wonder if I’ll get an email if I tag myself. @stephie
Anyways, yes, that was what I was going for. There are a few sit…[Read more]
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Stepheroni and Cheese replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 3 weeks ago
*comes back from getting buckets to use for a snow castle*
Hmmm… choices, choices….
TNPT 🙂
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Stepheroni and Cheese replied to the topic Writing Characters of the Opposite Gender in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 3 weeks ago
Often what I’ve observed is that guys who grow up without a father figure tend to take on more of the qualities of a woman because that’s all they know. This isn’t always a bad thing, but it can mean that they don’t always know how to step into the role of man the way God intended.
THIS.
Like I said, I’m doing a sort of redempt…[Read more]
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Stepheroni and Cheese replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 3 weeks ago
Well, not only have I written my last five snowballs, I wrote about 2 000 words.
*chuckles*
And I killed off one of my beloved characters.
*cries heart out*
Anyways, now I have 10 snowballs.
I also really want another chapter from Linus.
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Stepheroni and Cheese replied to the topic Writing Characters of the Opposite Gender in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 3 weeks ago
@ellette-giselle @loopylin @theshadow @koshka @whalekeeper @whoever else was talking about this, I don’t know
I’m a little bit late to the party (a couple months late, but whatever), but I’ve got a question relating to the topic of women going into battle.
Sort of.
In my WIP, my female main character begins doing uncontroversial fine-for-girls…[Read more]
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Stepheroni and Cheese replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 3 weeks ago
Not finished my words, but I did want to show y’all some poems I wrote:
Éphémère
Retirés comme l’air de nos poumons
Vous êtes le silence maintenant
Nous sommes ce que nous devenons
Les chaînes du temps en remontant.
Here’s a translation:
Ephemeral
Withdrawn like the air of our lungs
You are the silence now
We are what we become<…[Read more]
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Stepheroni and Cheese replied to the topic You know you are a writer when… in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 3 weeks ago
THAT. Role playing games…*leans back and remembers*
As the eldest, I have many memories of leading role-playing games with my sisters. Think tea party but with a plot and all of the dolls are sick with appendicitis. (There were a lot of games. Some of them were action packed, like when we had a villain who wanted to take everyone…[Read more]
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Stepheroni and Cheese replied to the topic You know you are a writer when… in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 3 weeks ago
You know you’re a writer when you get annoyed with creative writing assignments for being so rigid.
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