Starshiness

@starshiness yes…..that’s how it is for me….

@starshiness

I love that character! He’s not similar to me at all, but he sounds amazing. Definitely go with Arden 🙂

@karissa-chmil

My favorite type of character to write is a little hard to pin down, but I would say they are reserved, shrewd, and logical (in contrast to spunky, outgoing, spontaneous, etc.). This is actually most of the…[Read more]

@starshiness

Oh yes! I do love seeing how much can be related in just a few words. It’s one thing that make poetry such a fun challenge.

(The baby shoes story is heartbreaking.)

I think some of my favorites are from the Bible (Like “God shall provide himself a sacrifice”. Can I get an amen?), but of course I didn’t write them.

I’ll have to get…[Read more]

@starshiness

Most fascinating! You display a very interesting thought.

AND the character it Describes is totally a favorite kind with me.

Good job!

*Looks back over it*

Woa! I just caught the last sentence. Ok, that’s neat.

As for critiques, I would say that the paragraph where you go into authenticity doesn’t quite fit the same flow as the…[Read more]

@starshiness

Thank you so much! I agree; it does have a foresty sound, I think.

“Rosalind: Well, this is the forest of Arden.

Touchstone: Ay, now am I in Arden; the more fool I; when I was at home, I was in a better place: but travelers must be content.”

-As You Like It, Act II, Sc. IV, lines 15-18

XD (apparently this is what everyone on here…[Read more]

@starshiness Those are awesome tidbits of story! Sadly, I don’t have anything which could fit in a single paragraph. I sorta think in long stories…….

@starshiness Thank you! The name Keilah was that of a Biblical fortress and means “citadel;” and my brother’s name is Ethan which means “strong” so it kind of goes with it….

Also, my dad had the same opinion about Reckless Love, which kinda ruined the song for me when he just straight up said that when my family was listening to the…[Read more]

@starshiness Hi there! I’m Keilah, you can call me K if you want. I like your name, because in one story I wrote, the cat character I had made for myself was called Starshine!