Starshiness

@ellette-giselle yep!

Reading through it again, I realized most of my “improvements” were already there and I missed them, but there’s still something I can’t put my finger on that doesn’t make sense.

@ellette-giselle honestly hybridlore’s got a point. It happened as a result of their faith, yes, but it’s been long enough in the story that readers might not be paying attention to that. Also, no one’s brought up why they were captured. I’ll get into that more once I’m finished with math work so hold on a sec. I’m not against what’s about to…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle ikr??

@ellette-giselle

Oh don’t worry. Things will be bad.

It’s crazy how this kind of sentence excites us.

Writers are nuts.

@theshadow thanks!

currently debating whether I should do some of my other ones today.

@godlyfantasy12 Go for it!!

@ellette-giselle wow, not even at the town yet and they’ve already gotten into a tangle!

I agree with Linus, drawing this out rather than having them immediately get rescued or escape or something makes it more interesting.

@linus-smallprint you’re welcome!

@freed_and_redeemed oooh! I like it so far! If you write any more please post it.

@godlyfantasy12 heyyyy welcome back!!! Glad you’re back to writing your story. I don’t exactly have the time to give feedback yet, but I will TOTALLY be back tomorrow.

I’m sorry for replying to everyone and possibly being annoying, but you all are making sense of something I wasn’t able to make sense of myself…..

so yeah that’s a thing.

@linus-smallprint Measuring how long one arm is and using that as a baseline for the other one helps me. Also, the arms tend to end toward the bottom of the hip, with the hands extending a little farther than that.

@theducktator

but having parents read my cringey emotional or romantic scenes…*shudders*

YES. THIS.

@esther-c

Tbh, I don’t share my writing with my parents until it’s in a final or almost final draft stage. The only place I rant about my characters or my writing is really on here or any other writing community. My family knows I write, and I actually used to share a lot of it with my siblings, but now I like giving them the best, not nec…

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@savannah_grace2009

Awww! Esther!!! That means literally so so SO much to me!!

I appreciate you so much, you’re amazing 🥺🥺💜💜💜💜

💕💕💕

So for a while I stopped writing altogether, because even when I would try to write happy things that didn’t include violence or too much evil or darkness, somehow the topic would always shift. And my heart was…

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And I’m sure that won’t be the case, but there’s a TON of stuff I’d have to explain before I gave them, say, the 215-page fanfic I finished last year, and I don’t really feel like I want to have to do that.

@savannah_grace2009

It is still hard to not feel left out when we start talking on KP and some girls have parents who edit their book, or are in love with every part of it. I’ve just never had that.

If it helps, I rarely share my writing with my parents anymore.

After Hunterclone Run, which was a disaster that we do not talk about, I started…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

 If one of the guys’ minds went in the same direction as mine and said something like ‘Yes, mom’ to Julian.

lol

also, you’re welcome!