@spradlin
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BlueJay replied to the topic Fruits of the Spirit in the forum Poetry Critiques 10 years ago
@sarah-h
1. Click on “link to poem”
2. Right hand click on picture and click “view image info”
3. Highlight all the text beside the word “location” (make sure you get all of it.)
4. Press ctrl (control) c on your keyboard
5. Come back to KP.
6. Begin a new message.
7. Click on the “img” button.
8. Ctrl V in the box. It will paste your link…[Read more] -
BlueJay replied to the topic Fruits of the Spirit in the forum Poetry Critiques 10 years ago
Oh good it worked. I’d explain how I did it, but I think it would be too confusing. However, if you really want to know, I can tell you.
Hey, I notice you spell Saviour with a ‘u’. Why is that? I thought America didn’t spell it that way. Same with colour and other words which the website is telling me are wrong.
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BlueJay replied to the topic Fruits of the Spirit in the forum Poetry Critiques 10 years ago
@sarah-h Oh, you lost your profile pic??? Well, the one you have no is cute. 🙂 I have a friend who as a cockatiel.
As for the poem, it’s great. I hope you don’t mind, but let me try something…

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Emma Flournoy posted an update 10 years ago
@Bluejay, I wondered if you’d like to be e-mail pen-pals? I know you’re four years older than me; and we’ll in all probability never meet, as we live on opposite corners of the world; and I’m not a writer (of fiction at least 🙂 )…but I’d like to get to know you better, and correspond regularly, if you’d like that. Whadda-ya say, Tessa? 🙂
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Snapper replied to the topic Writers' Corner 2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years ago
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BlueJay replied to the topic Writers' Corner 2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years ago
@daeus I won’t be able to write tonight either. I’ve got stuff I need to do. Sorry. 🙁
@dragon-snapper You’re Deaus’s only hope. -
BlueJay replied to the topic Writers' Corner 2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years ago
@daeus I won’t be able to write tonight either. I’ve got stuff I need to do. Sorry. 🙁
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Writers' Corner 2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years ago
@Daeus I won’t be with you tonight. Have fun though!
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BlueJay posted an update 10 years ago
Correct me if this doesn’t make sense, but this was a quote that I made up myself.
“Everything in life is fair. It’s just not always what we want.” ~ Tessa 🙂
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BlueJay replied to the topic Fruits of the Spirit in the forum Poetry Critiques 10 years ago
@daeus Yes, I did realize what the visual allowed you to see. I had planed on doing a cross first, but the words came and formed a body, which I like better.
Okay, yeah, I understand that. Thanks for critiquing this for me. I don’t normally write poetry, but I love this form.
Do you mind if I submit this poem to KP with your changes, as long as I…[Read more] -
Snapper replied to the topic Help With Synopsis in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years ago
Ah! @Hannah-c
I’m glad that worked out…Synopses are the worst thing in the world!!! So boring…
And BTW, the description makes me want to read it already. Actually, you just gave me an idea for a story! *flies off to brainstorm* -
Greta posted an update 10 years ago
@rolena-hatfield
Long time no see. Nice to “see” you again! 🙂-
Hey @gretald! Nice to “see” you again too! It has been a long time since I’ve been around KP. Mostly because I was gone for the summer at camp as a counselor. I missed the community here! How was your summer? Did you have any family vacations?
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@rolena-hatfield Being a camp counselor is fun, though! 🙂 What sort of camp was it? My summer was awesome! I got to go on a nice long vacation and have some quality time with my family.
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Ingrid replied to the topic Help With Synopsis in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years ago
@hannah-c
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Snapper replied to the topic Help With Synopsis in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years ago
@hannah-c
I’m warning you; I’m about to be brutally honest and contrary to everything everyone else has said.
This is not a synopsis. Synopsis-es are supposed to be one to two full pages long and are a general picture of what happens in the story including major scenes and major plot lines. They are meant to be sent to an editor or publisher to…[Read more] -
Greta replied to the topic Some Character Illustrations by Lightningmouse in the forum Art 10 years ago
@lightningmouse Wow, I love those drawings! I don’t think I could draw my character that well… 😛
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Greta replied to the topic Help With Synopsis in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years ago
I like it @hannah-c. And it does make me want to read your novel. 😉
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Greta replied to the topic May I ask for some help? -World Naming- in the forum Fantasy 10 years ago
@theliterarycrusader
Oh, okay. Man, I really need to read the Chuck Black books. 🙂 Both of those names are really clever. -
Snapper replied to the topic The Idea – Poem in the forum Poetry Critiques 10 years ago
This poem describes my life…lightbulb!
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Greta replied to the topic Why We Do This in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years ago
@Daeus Thank you. 🙂
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Greta replied to the topic May I ask for some help? -World Naming- in the forum Fantasy 10 years ago
@theliterarycrusader
I love the idea of spell words backwards. I need to try that sometime. Which author did you pick that up from? 😉 - Load More

@emma-flournoy Sure. I’d like to do that. I’ll warn you now, I’m terrible a checking my own writing, so you’ll probably end up with a lot of spelling and grammar errors in the emails. Mum is trying to get me to slow down so she’ll read my first two or three emails, so they should be problem free. 🙂 (My fingers try to keep up with my brain and…[Read more]
Oh yay! I’m glad you want to… 😉
I’ll e-mail Sarah and ask for your address; how do I e-mail her? :/
And I’m extremely meticulous with my spelling and grammar, so we should be a good match then!
@Bluejay
Just email me at kingdompenmag@gmail.com! 🙂
Thanks @spradlin. 🙂
@emma-flournoy Can’t wait for the first email between us.