@spradlin
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BlueJay replied to the topic The Hobbit in the forum Book Discussions 9 years, 12 months ago
@graciekry @his-instrument @jess @clairec @the-happy-bookaholic @dragon-snapper @timothy-young @warrioroftherealm @winter-rose @ingridrd @aysia-serene @adry_grace @daeus @belegteleri @hope @overcomer @vanna @faithdk @kate-flournoy @jadamae @hislittlerose @hannah-krynicki @writefury @hannah-olsen @dbhgodreigns @wordfitlyspoken @hannah-c @spradlin…[Read more]
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BlueJay replied to the topic Story book world-HELP! in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 9 years, 12 months ago
@hope & @dragon-snapper Thanks for the suggestions and list. *takes ice cream and chocolate bar.* 🙂
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BlueJay replied to the topic Story book world-HELP! in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 9 years, 12 months ago
@hope & @dragon-snapper Thanks for the suggestion and list. *takes ice cream and chocolate bar.* 🙂
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BlueJay replied to the topic Writers' Corner 2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 12 months ago
@sarah-h I MISSED YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 🙁 🙁 🙁 🙁 🙁 🙁 So sorry. And unfortunately I can’t join you even if you are still going. I have chores that I need to be working on. Try later???? 😉
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BlueJay replied to the topic Chatter in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 12 months ago
@sarah-h *writes note in prayer book* 🙂 I’ll be praying.
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BlueJay replied to the topic Chatter in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 12 months ago
@sarah0h *writes note in prayer book* 🙂 I’ll be praying.
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BlueJay replied to the topic I Have Arrived! in the forum Start HERE 9 years, 12 months ago
in a game of CATCH – Chase After The Cowering Human
@anne-of-lothlorien That’s so funny. *reads about laptop* **FAINTS** I managed to drop mine and it didn’t like it. But before that I had to take it in to repairs cause the DVD player wasn’t working. And I was trying to get Chuck Black’s movie entry done. 🙂 So I feel for you. 🙁
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BlueJay replied to the topic I Have Arrived! in the forum Start HERE 9 years, 12 months ago
in a came of CATCH – Chase After The Cowering Human
@anne-of-lothlorien That’s so funny. *reads about laptop* **FAINTS** I managed to drop mine and it didn’t like it. But before that I had to take it in to repairs cause the DVD player wasn’t working. And I was trying to get Chuck Black’s movie entry done. 🙂 So I feel for you. 🙁
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Snapper replied to the topic Story book world-HELP! in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 9 years, 12 months ago
Here are all the fairy tales I can think of:
Sleeping Beauty
Cinderella
Snow White
Rapunzel
The Snow Queen (the original version of FROZEN before Disney)
Beauty and the Beast
Pinocchio
Hansel and Gretel
Thumbelina and Tom ThumbI know there are more, but not the basic ones. Wikipedia has a List of Fairy Tales page.
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Snapper replied to the topic Character Outlines in the forum Characters 9 years, 12 months ago
Thank you, @mark-kamibaya! That was very helpful; same to you, @jess. By family, I mean who are their parents, what happened to the parents and what significance are the parents to the character and the story, and does the character have any siblings?
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Snapper replied to the topic Character Outlines in the forum Characters 9 years, 12 months ago
Thank you, @mark-kimbaya! That was very helpful; same to you, @jess. By family, I mean who are their parents, what happened to the parents and what significance are the parents to the character and the story, and does the character have any siblings?
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Snapper replied to the topic Character Outlines in the forum Characters 9 years, 12 months ago
Thank you, @mark-kimbaya! That was very helpful; same to you, @jess. By family, I mean who are their parents, what happened to the parents and what significance are the parents to the character and the story, and does the character have any siblings?
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Snapper replied to the topic Writers' Corner 2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 12 months ago
@sarah-h I think I might be able to join you for a little bit if you’re still available.
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Josiah DeGraaf replied to the topic Structure and Character Arcs in the forum Characters 9 years, 12 months ago
@mark-kamibaya: Haven’t read McKee yet, but he’s rather high on my reading list. Hopefully I’ll be able to get to his book soon. Since I’m not as familiar with competing structures, because of how broad the three act structure is, my view tends to be that most stories work well with following that basic structure, albeit with certain tweaks…[Read more]
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Ingrid replied to the topic Evil Poem in the forum Poetry Critiques 9 years, 12 months ago
I like it, @anne-of-lothlorien. However, I feel like something is missing. If you’re going for darker, then it needs to BE darker. (Ask someone more experienced with poetry for help there. 🙂 ) Right now I feel like it’s a little whimsical, and if that’s what you’re going for, great job! (You could use Daeus’s idea to make it even more so.)
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Hope Ann replied to the topic I Have Arrived! in the forum Start HERE 9 years, 12 months ago
@anne-of-lothlorien Hey, I’m going to start it tomorrow. 😉 I’ve been…busy. Lots of stuff. Life. You know how it goes. I won’t have it by this Sunday, but I’m hoping to have it ready by the next time we’re at church. *crosses fingers*
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Hope Ann replied to the topic Evil Poem in the forum Poetry Critiques 9 years, 12 months ago
I’ve a feeling @kate-flournoy will like this whenever she gets back on wifi *raises voice* KATTTTTE *sighs* this is what happens when someone leaves the internet. 😉 And I like the poem.
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Hope Ann replied to the topic Story book world-HELP! in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 9 years, 12 months ago
@bluejay Well, I have written a Rapunzel retelling, and unpublished Sleeping Beauty retelling, and am currently working on a Hansel and Gretel retelling… As for other fairy tales, have you heard of Rooglewood? They have three books out now, each with five novellas in them focused around one story: Five Glass Slippers (Cinderella); Five Enchanted…[Read more]
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BlueJay replied to the topic A Tale From Two Views in the forum Poetry 9 years, 12 months ago
@sarah-h 🙁 Oh well. I’m sure we will make contact again. 🙂
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BlueJay replied to the topic Chatter in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 12 months ago
@sarah-h *rushes back from having tea* I will definitely be praying for both your brothers.
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