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BlueJay replied to the topic Writers' Corner #3 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 10 months ago
More editing done @hope. 🙂 But it’s good. This is the first story that I have gotten seriously critiqued by lots of people and I’m so excited. I’d love it, if this story was good enough to be published one day. 🙂 🙂 🙂
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Hope Ann replied to the topic Writers' Corner #3 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 10 months ago
I’m done, @bluejay. I got the scene I needed fixed rewritten! How have you done?
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BlueJay replied to the topic Favorite Movies in the forum Film 9 years, 10 months ago
@emma-flournoy I’ve read a book on him, but maybe the author was biased. I have not researched him on the internet or anything like that. But the book I read made him similar to Davy portrayed by Fess.
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BlueJay replied to the topic Writers' Corner #3 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 10 months ago
Yep. @hope
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Hope Ann replied to the topic Writers' Corner #3 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 10 months ago
@bluejay I’m going to be writing for about half an hour if you are still here. 🙂
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Chatter in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 10 months ago
@Daeus that’s great!!! I love combination spoofs.
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Favorite Movies in the forum Film 9 years, 10 months ago
@Bluejay Yes, I’ve seen all those movies! He’s great in all of them. And I know! Georgie’s hilarious.
Oh, the real Davy Crockett was a decent person, as portrayed by Fess Parker?? Well, that shows you how much I know. 😛 I thought I remembered doing some research on him and not being very impressed…maybe I’m remembering wrong. Where do you know…[Read more] -
Snapper replied to the topic Writers' Corner #3 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 10 months ago
@bluejy *snaps fingers* I knew I’d lose track! I always do. Ugh.
Well, anyway, I managed to write nothing, but I got through a lot of grammar errors. Yay and no yay at the same time… 🙂 -
BlueJay replied to the topic Writers' Corner #3 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 10 months ago
@winter-rose Thanks for joining us.
@hope are you around? Cause I can keep going…
@dragon-snapper How’d you go? I am unsure how much I got done as I have been editing The Golden Conch, but I’m pleased with how I went. 🙂 -
BlueJay replied to the topic Writers' Corner #3 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 10 months ago
@winter-rose Thanks for joining us.
@hope are you around? Cause I can keep going…
@dragon-snapper How’d you go? I am unsure how much I got done as I have been editing The Golden COnch, but I’m pleased with how I went. 🙂 -
BlueJay replied to the topic Favorite Movies in the forum Film 9 years, 10 months ago
WHAT!!! I LOVE THE STORY OF THE REAL DAVY CROCKETT!!!!
Yes, I have seen the Fess Parker version. I have also seen Davy Crockett and the River Pirates. Have you? I love Georgie. He is so funny.
I definitely can’t picture John Wayne being better that Fess as Davy, so it doesn’t surprise me that it wasn’t that great.
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Favorite Movies in the forum Film 9 years, 10 months ago
@Bluejay Yes I have! It was a while ago, but I remember liking it very much. That was the first John Wayne one I watched, I think. Hilarious!!
I may have only seen him in two…that one and The Alamo, off the top of my head. But I did not like him in The Alamo. He was playing Davy Crockett; I much prefer Fess Parker’s version. Have you seen…[Read more]
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BlueJay replied to the topic I Need a Title in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 10 months ago
@anne-of-lothlorien How about “The Song” or “The Swing”?
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BlueJay replied to the topic Writers' Corner #3 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 10 months ago
@overcomer (I sent you an email back. 😛 )
@winter-rose They are today. The topic hadn’t been used for 4 days so I figured we needed some heroes to save it and heroes look good in capes. 🙂 -
Mallory O'Bier replied to the topic Writers' Corner #3 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 10 months ago
Thanks, @bluejay . 😉 🙂
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BlueJay replied to the topic Writers' Corner #3 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 10 months ago
@winter-rose Still editing, so join in. *bestows cape on you too*
@overcomer No worries. Thanks, I’ll go check it out now. *Bestows cape on you for sending the email* 🙂 -
Mallory O'Bier replied to the topic Writers' Corner #3 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 10 months ago
Sorry @bluejay, I’m all washed up with writing for the evening. Thanks anyway! (By the way, I just sent you another email.) 🙂
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Mallory O'Bier replied to the topic Writers' Corner #3 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 10 months ago
Sorry Bluejay, I’m all washed up with writing for the evening. Thanks anyway! (By the way, I just sent you another email.) 🙂
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BlueJay replied to the topic Writers' Corner #3 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 10 months ago
@daeus Never mind. I’m sure we will meet again. 😉
@dragon-snapper 😉 I know. And I have sunny days and flowers everywhere and terrible hayfever. 😛 -
BlueJay replied to the topic Writers' Corner #3 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 10 months ago
@deaus Never mind. I’m sure we will meet again. 😉
@dragon-snapper 😉 I know. And I have sunny days and flowers everywhere and terrible hayfever. 😛 - Load More
