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Josiah DeGraaf replied to the topic Homework for Video 4: Experiment in Living in the forum Writing Assignments 9 years, 2 months ago
@jess-penrose I like the irony of the MC realizing that he deserves justice as well. Is there a way you could bring about a physical component for the MC’s poetic justice as well? That seems to be the main thing you’re missing. I like the nuanced version of #4 here as well–it resolves the potential issues I was seeing with it in the other topic.
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Josiah DeGraaf replied to the topic Homework for Video 4: Experiment in Living in the forum Writing Assignments 9 years, 2 months ago
@jess-penrose I like the irony of the MC realizing that he deserves justice as well. Is there a way you could bring about a physical component for the MC’s poetic justice as well? That seems to be the main thing you’re missing. I like the nuanced version of #4 here as well–it resolves the potential issues I was seeing with it in the other topic. 🙂
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Josiah DeGraaf replied to the topic Discussion for Video Twelve: Foil Characters in the forum Discussion Questions 9 years, 2 months ago
@ethryndal Good observation there. I think that’s generally true of the more prominent foil characters in literature, although you get pretty good diversity on whether the foils are right or not when you start looking at less prominent foils in literature.
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Josiah DeGraaf replied to the topic Homework for Video 12: Foil Characters in the forum Writing Assignments 9 years, 2 months ago
@ethryndal Sounds like some good adjustments to make on the thematic front. How would you say Lotch and Noyarc would answer your story’s focusing question? It looks like their EiLs are pretty close to functioning as answers to that question (especially Lotch’s), but Noyarc’s may need a couple small adjustments to fully answer that.
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Josiah DeGraaf replied to the topic Discussion for Video Two: The Importance of Theme in the forum Discussion Questions 9 years, 2 months ago
@jess-penrose Yes–it’s very freeing as an author to know that you can write about meaningful topics in a powerful way in a way that isn’t preachy to the audience. Hold that goal and that anti-goal in mind, and both should be powerful motivators for you to study and master themes!
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Josiah DeGraaf replied to the topic Homework for Video 3: Discovering & Deepening Theme in the forum Writing Assignments 9 years, 2 months ago
Sorry I’m late on interacting with you all on this! The KP staff had a work retreat this weekend and I fell behind on keeping up with these…
My biggest recommendation would be to consider the different ways Christians might honestly answer that focusing question in the way they live their lives. While most Christians may know…[Read more]
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Josiah DeGraaf replied to the topic Discussion for Video One: Introduction in the forum Discussion Questions 9 years, 2 months ago
@jess-penrose Great motives! Sounds like you’ll especially enjoy one of the last lessons in the course on how to write explicitly Christian fiction in particular. Most of the course will focus on how to write meaningful stories from a Christian perspective effectively, but that lesson will particularly focus on writing in the “Christian fiction…[Read more]
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Josiah DeGraaf replied to the topic Hey there in the forum Start HERE 9 years, 2 months ago
Welcome to the site @lifeofkatie! Congrats on being roped in by some of our most enthusiastic forum members. 😉 Haven’t read any Spurgeon yet, but he’s on my list of theologians to read!
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Josiah DeGraaf replied to the topic *Stands up from some sort of shadowy corner and waves* Aiya! in the forum Start HERE 9 years, 2 months ago
Late to the party, but welcome to the site, @jess-penrose! Glad to have you here with us. 🙂
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Snapper replied to the topic Hey there in the forum Start HERE 9 years, 2 months ago
@lifeofkatie When I first took lessons, learning to strum and the chords, my teacher taught me how to read music with the guitar. Now, if I want to learn something, I’ll usually just pull up sheet music on the internet. That, or I’ll try to do it by ear. I did Misty Mountains and the Edge of Night by ear, though I usually need sheet music. 😛 Now,…[Read more]
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Hey there in the forum Start HERE 9 years, 2 months ago
@LifeofKatie HELLO AGAIN! Welcome, welcome, and thrice welcome! Etc., etc., etc. 😀 (Blue’s a good color.)
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Snapper replied to the topic Writers' Corner #6 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 2 months ago
Okay. I actually need to go eat dinner, 😀
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Snapper replied to the topic Writers' Corner #6 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 2 months ago
@that_writer_girl_99 On second thought, I want to keep going. 😛
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Snapper replied to the topic Writers' Corner #6 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 2 months ago
@that_writer_Girl_99 I’m done now. I wrote 150 words to a poem.
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Snapper replied to the topic Writers' Corner #6 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 2 months ago
@that_writer_girl_99 Great! Right now I’m just doing some random writing. 😀 I finished the entry.
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Snapper replied to the topic Hey there in the forum Start HERE 9 years, 2 months ago
@daeus Yeah! Katie plays guitar!
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Snapper started the topic Writers' Corner #6 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 2 months ago
Yep. It’s that time. 😛 Number 6!!!
@daeus @kate-flournoy @jess @winter-rose @that_writer_girl_99 I’m writing a children’s short story for another contest. -
Snapper replied to the topic Beginners' Tips For Writing Science Fiction in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 2 months ago
*drags self over by hands, clawing against the dusty road* Must…reply… *collapses*
Ahem…anyway. You can ignore that. 😛
SFR-P2 Eureka!!! Wow! I never thought of genres that way. They are changing quite often, especially in popularity. New ones are popping up often. As of now, the most popular one seems to be dystopian. You could say that…[Read more] -
Snapper replied to the topic Spring Writing/Reading Goals in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 2 months ago
@hope Do you schedule yourself a time for each?
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Snapper replied to the topic Just Chatter #2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 2 months ago
Oh, and the red tailed hawk.
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