Brianne

@keilah-h

yessss I get like this too, I decide a scene is cringey, but I like it too much to remove it.

YES YES YES YES YESSSSSS

that’s the most relatable thing I’ve heard XDXD

What are they gonna do to Sef’s little sis?

Well…its kinda a long story and it’s gonna give away a lot (I also need to flesh out the plot wayyy more)

When I have all m…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

However, I have also gotten far enough to determine something else. Due to some things such as the romance, I don’t think am in the target audience for your story. I am no longer going to read this. This does not mean your story is bad, it just means that it’s not for me and I think others will be able to give you better fee…

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@stephie

I HAVE RIZZ

slayyyy

@the_lost-journal

omccc

I like your name!!! It’s so cool!!!

yeah, just like Hybridlore, I didn’t know if it was your real name or not lol…

But it’s so unique and cool!

I’ve been pronouncing it “Kee-fa” *dies laughing*

@ellette-giselle

We’ll have to see!

I love how you always say stuff like that like you have no idea what’s going to actually happen 😂

@the_lost-journal

Is it pronounced keh-fa or kay-fa?

@the_lost-journal

Oh, cool. I meant you didn’t have to answer if you didn’t want to because some people don’t share their names on here, and I didn’t know if it was your real name.

A lot of times people pick fake names or usernames on here for internet safety. Like Rae and Loopy. Obviously Hybridlore isn’t my real name xD

@the_lost-journal

Sometimes KP has weird glitches… the joke around here is that “Wyoh” the “ghost” eats our posts.

@ellette-giselle

Sounds good.

Yep. Like two days ago it was 80. In February. 😅 I mean, winter never lasts long here, but still. I’m not looking forward to the summer weather.

He seems like a character. I’m interested to know what he thinks of Leon and Julian and their faith.

@ellette-giselle

To be honest, it doesn’t really matter either way. I was just surprised at that sentence in the book because I’d never thought of it that way before. You might throw other believers off too, or maybe I’m the only one… I don’t see it  as a big problem.

Yeah 😆 I should probably change it. It just looks so cozy in there. . . *meanw…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Yeah, it makes sense. It’s just interesting. If God sacrificed animals in place of Adam and Eve so they didn’t have to die, why wouldn’t the Bible just say that? All it says in Genesis is that he clothed them with skins.

@the_lost-journal

Sorry I dropped off the face of the earth for a day. It was super busy.

Okay, sounds cool! And yeah, kind of creepy too 😂 Carrot Cake sounds like a character. I like how you came up with the different races and how they become empowered when they fall.

@the_lost-journal

Really, lol. Hmm… I feel like other people do, too, but I’m not sure because I haven’t read too many people’s writing. But you’re right, most of us don’t for the most part.

Also, random question. What made you choose the name Kefa? (You don’t have to answer if you don’t want to.)

@ellette-giselle

Don’t worry, Julian is having all the same questions as you most likely are.

I can tell 😂

Interesting. I didn’t know animals were killed in Adam and Eve’s place, even though I knew about sacrifices later. Where is it referenced as the first sacrifice?

@theshadow

Yayy!! It sounds interesting—a little creepy, perhaps, but I’m intrigued!

@ellette-giselle

I’m so sorry I didn’t get back to you yesterday! It was such a chaotic day and I didn’t get home until 8 pm.

I really like the way you handled their conversion through the journal entries! It was cool. Leon was a gladiator?? 😅

God slew two animals in [Adam’s and Eve’s] place.

Um, when was this?

@keilah-h

I mean I understand they have to have some water in order to live, but didn’t you say somewhere else that Azers don’t like water? Or did I completely misunderstand and that’s just a Ottoline/Naami thing?

So I’m not completely sure about that XDXD

Mainly, they just are very possessive of their lands and don’t want trespassers XD especia…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Girl you should legit be an editor hahahaha you’ve always been sooooo good with critiques!!!

Thank you so muchhhhh

@elishavet-pidyon

You might be an author if you randomly eavesdrop on strangers so you can get story ideas.

I lowkey love eavesdropping and people watching, but it’s hard to make it inconspicuous. 🤣