Brianne

@freedomwriter76

*Me dialing child services*

Poor boys *Cries*

Do your charries ever get a break?

I mean mine don’t but still…

XD

Love the scenes though

@whalekeeper

Yep the notifs arent working, and as @thearcaneaxiom said the page formatting is weird. But this has happened before a while ago, so it hopefully will get fixed again!

@freedomwriter76

Oh my goodness!!!!! You finished?!?!?! GOOD JOB!!! CONGRATULATIONS! How exciting!!!!💗 🎉 👏 I’m so glad we all could help you!😊

@whalekeeper

Yeah, that’s the thing with mechanics, you can force it, so sometimes you need to take a break and come back to it. This doesn’t only apply to things like worldbuilding, but really everything. Math problems I struggle with for example seem to suddenly fit together rather simply if I take a week off from it.

@whalekeeper

Lol! Yes, I would greatly advocate templates if they weren’t abused as much as they are.

That’s awesome you had the same thought, it’s still a rather simple what if, because it is a simple inversion of a binary concept we encounter daily, but that alone can still lead to incredible worlds of a completely different nature, with…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

Cool! Yeah, that’s pretty much what I meant, just what your plans were, and how you would approach it.

@whalekeeper

Yeah, if an iterative process like that works for you, then that’s an excellent way of doing it. It would help with refinement, allowing you to perfect the writing, as long as it isn’t too much revision that no progress is made.

If you want to make a strong cast, and your not worried of over attachment, then I would say it works…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Yes! You’ve worded it perfectly Whale! It’s definitely not something you can control, I personally find it fruitful to just talk about it, and think openly with others, but my best ideas just kind of come to me randomly.

There’s ideas that could never be on a template, like: What if there was a world where light and dark switched…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

Congratulations Freedom!!!!!!!

That’s amazing! Any completion of a book is a victory well earned, and you deserve it!

What’s your intent on publishing?

@freedomwriter76

OH MY GOODNESS GIRL CONGRATULATIONS!!!!!!!! 🎉🎉🎉🎉

@euodia-vision

Aww have fun!!

And I get what you’re saying, summer can be hectic

But it’s hard to believe it’s almost over

@freedomwriter76

Girl!!!! That incredible!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I can’t wait to someday read it!!!!!!!

Congratulations

@mineralizedwritings @hybridlore @freedomwriter76 @keilah-h @euodia-vision

I have two more chapters!!!!!

And Wanda and Peter (Andrew) talking is amazing

Those two are honestly pretty similar

also you’ll catch on to how I separated the spiders XD I’m not proud of it but it works XD

Chapter 5

“Well, now my cabin is destroyed thanks to y…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

This is something I’ve wondered myself for a while. Because any character I develop enough to be interesting, I suddenly want to follow as a lead character. For characters important to a story, I would once again go to the idea of mechanics. I’m not sure if you’ve seen that forum I started (I can link you if you want), but I go into…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

I’ve been experiencing the same thing the past few weeks. Also for the past few days, the pages have been formatted weird again.

@whalekeeper

Oooh thats tricky, I have not really experienced this yet so I dont really know what to say, maybe work with your characters a bit and write short scenes with all of them together. For names though (Yay!) I have a ton!

Boys: Augustus, Cassius, Baxter, Edison, Ephraim, Ernest, Fletcher, Livingstone, Palmerston, Thaddeus, Allesandro,…[Read more]

@jonas

It’s very much related to what you said. There’s some characters that fit the description of characters you’ve mentioned, which isn’t saying much, because a lot would fit, but the particular execution of it is incredible.

@jonas

Oh, and is this character with a potential redemption arch a dragon, or a human with the dragons or a human doing their own thing?